Review Detail of Netzach in Monster Integration

After 85 chapters, it's my evaluation: Well, how should I explain...? This is the meta example: "Everything you shouldn't do in a story." It kinda reminds me of these fellow authors who, for the number's sake, keep fast posting but never tried to understand what they were writing. Where is the passion? Where is the love? Author, do you like your story? Do you like what you write? I'm sorry to ask you this because I'm also a writer and I know what it means to write, but even so, I'd like to find out why you don't put some effort into your writing. Moreover, apps exist to help you improve your skills; some are free, and others are to be paid. Well, it doesn't matter. The matter here is I'd like to evaluate your story, but I do not find any clues to make it. This is even sadder because the concept was interesting. I'll keep reading it because I want to know if your writing improves with time.