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watashiwavdesu
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I state that so far only 10 chapters have been released, so this review is considered "to trust". I read a lot of fan fiction about danmachi, really many and every time there were two options to choose from. The tragic past, or one that is never explained in detail because it matters little to them. There is a third category however. I would call rarities among the rarities, where the past is simple, coincided and really serves to give more depth to the main character. This novel has one of these past. You have surely already been able to read something or if you have not read it, just read the first line. " I am cancer-stricken" essentially what it says. From here the past evolves and explains who are the protagonists that act in his previous life, and we can discover a bit of the personality of the protagonist from the first chapters, avoiding all the information of little account or meaningless.. Certainly little is taken into account about his mother, it was a bit put aside just because it wasn't important in the novel itself and could only serve to enrich the backstory more, but we know that by her character, she has always been close to the protagonist. I think the writing quality is excellent, the descriptions aren't boring and are put in order to stimulate the reader to continue reading, everything proceeds with a moderate speed, the plot is not fast but not slow, it evolves chapter after chapter in a stable way. The world has yet to be explored properly, I mean it’s only 10 chapters but from the expectation I would say that the author will manage without problems. Last but not least, the stability of updates. The author says he has never written before and that this is his first work, yet he manages to write two chapters a day, and they are very long, from the amount of pages no less than 2000 per chapter, someone even over 2500. I don’t know if it’s a natural talent or just that author is a liar, lol. The only thing that should be improved could be the use of even more specific words and more present comparisons to make readers better imagine the scenes that are taking place, but I would say that for a fan fiction on webnovel, the quality is more than good, I’d say it’s of the highest quality. This novel deserves the 2nd place in the ranking.

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Is it Wrong to be Reincarnated after Death?

SkyInTheNight

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Yuki13_
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Oh, hi Author-san. Nice to see you here on someone else's reviews. Your novel is also of good quality.

WonderfulPerson
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Now I want to know how can this review have already so many likes it was written barely 5 minutes ago lmao. By the way you're right, this novel has great potential.

WonderfulPerson
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I didn't notice before you pointed it out..

Yuki13_:Oh, hi Author-san. Nice to see you here on someone else's reviews. Your novel is also of good quality.
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SkyInTheNight
SkyInTheNightAuthorSkyInTheNight

Thank you very much for making this review, I have always admired you because even after all the hatred you received you never gave up and you went on to write your novel, which gave inspiration to me to publish this novel. I will try to work and improve the quality of my writing, as I said I am really a rookie and I still have a lot to learn about this field, but I will do my best to make this novel something that I can feel proud of, something that you also aspire to. I say good luck to you as well, I have to update my review on your novel, it's developing in a fantastic way, I love it.

Kurowari_Da421
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( b._.)b...author-san of a fellow DanMachi Fanfiction creator, like how the author of this Fanfiction is, we must give him/her our Braincells-chan. We must advice him/her for our mistakes we made. The guide him/her to the path of greatness not like ours...or most likely, mine. A trash. But I trust you author of another DanMachi fanfic. I guess this Fanfic really have a potential after all...that's all..

DeeplyLostInShadow
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If Author-san says so, then I must read this!

Fazed
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I'll trust on this one wav san.

Kurigohan
KurigohanLv5Kurigohan

This harem or one pairing? I din't see genre harem

SkyInTheNight:Thank you very much for making this review, I have always admired you because even after all the hatred you received you never gave up and you went on to write your novel, which gave inspiration to me to publish this novel. I will try to work and improve the quality of my writing, as I said I am really a rookie and I still have a lot to learn about this field, but I will do my best to make this novel something that I can feel proud of, something that you also aspire to. I say good luck to you as well, I have to update my review on your novel, it's developing in a fantastic way, I love it.
SkyInTheNight
SkyInTheNightAuthorSkyInTheNight

monogamy/polygamy

Kurigohan:This harem or one pairing? I din't see genre harem
Kurigohan
KurigohanLv5Kurigohan

Hah? Monogami is one wife poligami mores wife so this fanfic

SkyInTheNight:monogamy/polygamy
Kurigohan
KurigohanLv5Kurigohan

?

SkyInTheNight
SkyInTheNightAuthorSkyInTheNight

polygamy is 2 wives. 3+ is considered a harem.

Kurigohan:Hah? Monogami is one wife poligami mores wife so this fanfic
Kurigohan
KurigohanLv5Kurigohan

Ahh okay i see first cover hestia and second cover haruhime so thi two wives mc?

SkyInTheNight
SkyInTheNightAuthorSkyInTheNight

Cover is not based on the main waifu. Rather than that it's based on the Arcs may it be small or big where the character in the cover is the most important one.

Kurigohan:Ahh okay i see first cover hestia and second cover haruhime so thi two wives mc?
Silent_Moon
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So... There'll only be two wives, right?

SkyInTheNight:polygamy is 2 wives. 3+ is considered a harem.
SkyInTheNight
SkyInTheNightAuthorSkyInTheNight

Yes, 1 or 2 girls for romance.

Silent_Moon:So... There'll only be two wives, right?
BreezyNovels
BreezyNovelsLv5BreezyNovels

Can you say who or no?

SkyInTheNight:Yes, 1 or 2 girls for romance.
SkyInTheNight
SkyInTheNightAuthorSkyInTheNight

nah won't say

BreezyNovels:Can you say who or no?
ExaltedCrow
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How does “cancer-stricken” not fall under the tragic past? Imo it’s the laziest type of character building and you’re better off just not knowing anything. As you can see I hate tragic past MC :) Btw I’m not here hating or anything

SkyInTheNight
SkyInTheNightAuthorSkyInTheNight

if this type of character building is lazy...

ExaltedCrow:How does “cancer-stricken” not fall under the tragic past? Imo it’s the laziest type of character building and you’re better off just not knowing anything. As you can see I hate tragic past MC :) Btw I’m not here hating or anything