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Daoist626662

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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist62666220d
    Commented

    more like 8.33 if you use percentages

    Tom scribbled on the ground for a while and said quietly to the eagle at the door, "Nine minutes."
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    Drawing cards at Hogwarts
    Book&Literature · inferno303
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist62666226d
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    first of all, how did a sheep lead a lion army, no normal sheep can do it, and if the sheep is ordinary the moment a lion is hungry it would eat it, the lions then woul fight for the alpha spot, then it would be an army of lions led by a lion

    "I am not afraid of an army of lions led by a sheep; I am afraid of an army of sheep led by a lion." ~Alexander the Great
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    COTE: L Lawliet In The Classroom Of The Elite
    Anime & Comics · MilkywayAndromeda
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist62666210mth
    Posted

    you aint getting no 5 stars with that updating scedule. story good thought...................................................................

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    The guardians of Pandora
    Movies · White_Pheonix_
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266622yr
    Replied to Daoist626662

    i meant early stage A.I

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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266622yr
    Replied to Daoist626662

    so i reread most of the chapters, there was alot of improvement, espetially with making some things clear, i don't know if this is intentianal but there are alot of times were things are vaige, and i hope it wouldn't be all answered with one big information dump as alot of stories with that problem become too boring as the answer wouldn't be as effective, some stories link it all with a short explenation that leads to another mystory, and the answer to it would solve the puzzle, and that would be a good way to go about it, but a unique way to lead the story forward would also be good, but for both ways to work the story has to be attractive all the way throught, another thing is that that when a mission is issued such as in the beginning of the story with the tutorials, it repeats alot of thing which makes it sound like an early state A.I , i don't know if its only in some chapters or if its intentional, i hope there is an exeplenation for it. note: thank you for the update and the fix, it helped alot

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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266622yr
    Replied to CephasWRITES

    can you tell me how long it will take you

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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266622yr
    Replied to Daoist626662

    note: most advansed in the country not the world

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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266622yr
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    but a place being rural doesn't mean its poor, as many places in which rich people live are called rural because its far from most populated areas, so the most modern term for rural would be a place that has a small to almost non existent population for any reason

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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266622yr
    Replied to CephasWRITES

    at first in english, they used urban as a way to say the state or a city lately where its the most advansed, and rural as in the mountings or villages, now people say urban as in old and rural as in low economical areas, so any use is actualy correct

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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266622yr
    Replied to CephasWRITES

    i good auther gets a good review man, keep at it

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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266622yr
    Replied to CephasWRITES

    the bold text seems to start from chapter 43

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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266622yr
    Posted

    there was some mistakes in the writing and also some bold text, but most if not all the mistakes espetialy in the early chapters was corrected, so overall pretty decent writing espetialy without editors, the development of the story is slow at first but it pick up the pace after the 9 months skip or in the 15 to 20 chapter i don't remember, even thought some characters are bland or they seem so at first the main characters are mostly fun and interesting, no matter who you are you will relate to at least one character, the author updates the story daily and cares about any helpfull reviews, and the world is very interesting, the only bad thing about this novel is that if you don't pay attention and read between the lines you will get confused with the character swiches, so read it with an open mind, what i can say is that even thought it has some rought edges here and there, i defenetly recommend , its a very rich story so read it when you have alot of time like this cat

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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266622yr
    Replied to CephasWRITES

    thank you, i didn't expect an answer, please post an update if you fix it, i don't want to miss out on such a good story, i spent hours trying different translators but they didn't work, again thank you, it'll probably be alot of work thought

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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266622yr
    Replied to CephasWRITES

    author the bold text is an issue can you please rewrite the system notifications as they become an issue to understand from chapter 43, or can you please recomend a bold text to english translator as the google translator does no capture bold and i only found bold text generators

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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266622yr
    Replied to CephasWRITES

    author the bold text is an issue can you please rewrite the system notifications as they become an issue to understand from chapter 43, or can you please recomend a bold text to english translator as the google translator does no capture bold and i only found bold text generators

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    The World Flipped
    Fantasy · CephasWRITES
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266623yr
    Replied to Daoist_Black

    well .this is a novel the only thing a harem of 100 or so would only hinder story development

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    Omnipotent Sage
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266623yr
    Replied to Benjamin_

    it will change

    Ch 1 Opportunity
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    Hero System! Transported to Another World
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266623yr
    Commented

    don't mind me

    Ch 1 Opportunity
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    Hero System! Transported to Another World
    Fantasy · Ripcorez
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266623yr
    Replied to Ekman

    agreed

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    Forty Millenniums of Cultivation
    · SANFU INTERACTIVE ENTETRTAINMENT
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  • Daoist626662
    Daoist6266623yr
    Replied to Ekman

    agreed

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    Forty Millenniums of Cultivation
    · SANFU INTERACTIVE ENTETRTAINMENT
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