I'm the author of this novel and will sincerely love to see you all reviews and opinions, I believe the novel has gotten nowhere yet, but i will really love to see reviews on the previous chapters, you power voting will go long way for me
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LIKEWhen i started reading i saw the chapters 0 with the long break and more editing and all. If i were to review it, it would go to 1* at chapter 3. I wont go farther. Maybe before writing you should learn how to write a sentence. How to punctuate it. To start it with a MAJ and end it with a dot(or else).
Why isbthe MC deliberately made an idiot. I mean his backstory and gamer background should make him competent atleast but heâs an idiot who doesnt improve mana core but wants to be a magician. He sleeps in a class giving important info in an academy that kills people randomly. im dissapointed author
do some editting on the early chapter, honestly i almost feel like i'm reading MTL, a bit better than MTL but still its bad i dont even have the mood to read past chapter 1 because of that, so please just edit it, i will come back in the future to read it again and hopefully it's fixed p.s: prob many people also stop for the few chapter because of it so you might have to fix it
Daoist626662:author the bold text is an issue can you please rewrite the system notifications as they become an issue to understand from chapter 43, or can you please recomend a bold text to english translator as the google translator does no capture bold and i only found bold text generators
there's no God at the top of the tower, you sure you not just jumping to conclusions after reading just few lines
CockroaChan:Why does the synopsis look like second life ranker ripoff? 1)Tower 2)Tutorial 3)Tower Guardian 4)God at the top of tower