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what i've been waiting for is when Gojo finally proclaim he's the strongest under the heaven with so many witness....[img=recommend]
"ehem" superior iroman suit "ehem"
i like if you involved character other than jujutsu buddy,, let other truly realize they not living in peaceful world the seem to think hahaha
nah... mate let's just start slow... give the "Hajimme Ippo" first and we Golden
i'm gonna say it first.. he's Raiden/Ei son isn't he?
then prepare to awe in presence of my lv.80 C6 noel
i think only 'Blade Horizon' that stood out from the rest. if i'm not wrong about the name of the fanfic
buddy mha basically House of M will be if wanda didn't say a word "no more mutant"[img=recommend]
and then comes the cousin next, and comes the father, then comes the grandpa, and the ancestor also involved, basically the MC just fight the whole lineage of that guy hahahah
if i'm not wrong wasn't wanda maximoff has the same probability manipulation as well?
well... kalo nggak salah konsep pertama fate stay night itu eroge sih ya?... baru" pas fate Zero dan FGO yang membuat nama type moon naik skarang ini
same to me to brotha...
i think i remember in one of ghost rider issues when Johny blaze trap in literal hell and fight lucifer if I'm not wrong
For starters i want to thank you for writing this fic.... This is story is not that good but also not that bad, compare to other trash fic from this website i think yours is a gem in this site. You have no comment from me about your story because i already said my opinion in the previous word. I just want to remind you to not write Author note or whatever under the dialog in your fic, it's distracting, it's also ruin the immersion, if you want to leave an author note, there's a reason this website give a note box in the end of the chapter, use it and don't leave A/N between dialog, people want to read a stories not reading your thoughts.
of course, we can't save everybody, but we can save people in front of us. look at it from bystander POV, in their eyes Thomas and Martha waynes are just normal innocent people who about to get mug and killed, now from normal living being with a good hearth like supes , of course he's going to save some innocent who about to get killed, that's what a normal human being with a good hearth do, and your MC use an author POV because all of it happen because of the PLOT.
I'm the type of guy who always giving review after reading fanfic to the end no matter how "TRASH" the fanfic is, it's just my way of appreciating the work of the Author no matter how "TRASH" their novel is. now onto the review: this fanfic has so many good arc, and the expanded universe is also fresh in my mind, But it destroy around chapter 100-200 when the Author decided to satisfy his fetish into older widow by making the MC pursue the mom of nishimiya in 'Koe no Katachi', and then the MC also going after her daughter to, that's where this fanfic going downhill to "THRASH". and after that this fanfic starting to become great again, but the personality of the MC is becoming a "THRASH" the further chapter goes, the MC always divert the conversation when his harem always ask what is he doing in supernatural world, 'Don't want them get involved MY ASS AUTHOR' these MC harem already involved with supernatural the moment the MC reveal himself as magician and the MC always don't want to talk about the supernatural and always divert the conversation with his harem into dirty joke and ***, "THRASH" personality if i have to say. CONCLUSION: for reader who is virgin and loser, this fanfic is for you, because the mc brain is in his dick, always '*** this' '*** that'. the story is good when at the first 800 chapter and become worst much much more worst when you guys continue, the Author never respond to reader feedback and choose to continue his "THRASIER" fanfic till the end, that i can respect because he decide to finish this fanfic even though it's "THRASH".