Review Detail of the_fate in My Life As Tadano

For starters i want to thank you for writing this fic.... This is story is not that good but also not that bad, compare to other trash fic from this website i think yours is a gem in this site. You have no comment from me about your story because i already said my opinion in the previous word. I just want to remind you to not write Author note or whatever under the dialog in your fic, it's distracting, it's also ruin the immersion, if you want to leave an author note, there's a reason this website give a note box in the end of the chapter, use it and don't leave A/N between dialog, people want to read a stories not reading your thoughts.