Full marks first 17 ch. sad that i found this one too early… not enough Chapters Yet Oh well, Keep writing author im gonna keep reading Dontmindmetexttoofill150characters

Hate Novels with Plot armor

Thank good there are believable reasons for him surviving So far🙏🙏

Nothing new here, and what is there is lower quality the rest in average and riddled with gramatical errors Needs editing before im going back. Sorry but first 10 chap didnt catch me.

uff, I don't know about this one guys. The premise of the story is refreshing, "vlogger goes to another world", but it just has so many problems. In the first tens of chapters, Universe-wide reaching stuff is being foreshadowed. MC gets super broken stuff very fast without any work at all (Items without grind, Killing intent without fighting more than 2 times) and characters super like mc after having met him once. Now I know that luck is a thing but this one just piles on and on. It kinda feels like that every good thing that can happen to an MC like: -luck, face slapping, having a random girl from school like him, new OP Girl randomly likes him, S Class ability for free, Legendary item for free, System for free, Killing intent for free... happens to this one. The Vlogging part also becomes basically a side part of the story 50 chapters in I fell. Writing Now, this much is not that much of a problem as the others, considering that the author is a non-native speaker, but anyways there are grammatical errors that will make you pause all over the novel. Man sorry for the rant, just had such a good premise...

Legit fought 2 times???

Ok read legit 2 paragraphs down... On me guys

So you can sell random low lvl strengthening potion for 10k but the watch designed by the best designer and made by the best smith out of monster materials is only 100k?🤔

Idk about the pacing...

Idk about this one author

Could Have ended it with saying kid is dead and squashed. Going Into detail in which direction his Squashed limbs Etc. are pointing is a bit much no🤔🤔

This was like a good plane ride over The andes. all well flying at a steady height until you see the mountains coming closer fast. Man did this story crash in my opinion. everything going great, nothing exceptional, but steady improvement until a certain arc around chp. 400/500 i believe. Well until then was nice. do with this review what you will! :)

Why darkness tho and not space aTtribbute?

For me this setting had everYthing to make For aGreat Story, but the writing diDnt caTch me fast enough. give it a try To see for yourself, dont expect S+ tho

cmon if you enGlish is than bad our can still critizise .lol

i mean stupid tEenager dumb no?

think of the stupidest mc you can think of. Think of another one. Now multiply Them and you still only have 5% of the stupidity this mc has. Dont do it to yourself its not worth it.

I really like this one, here are my thoughts why: - the writing starts off kinda poor but gets better with every chapter and Gets good fairly quickly - although the concept is not entirely new, Its in no way overused and the author ads his own fresh twist - no “cliche” yet as far as i can tell - story that keeps you coming for more i have finished all the chapters there are and i must say this us the Best New novel i’ve found in a while. now pls keep up the update schedule🙏

do 10 y/olds really care about that tho

10 year old by the way