Raw name please...........................

chunins in naruto are incredibly weak after all.

I feel like you are nerfing naruto and underestimating the 8 gates way too much.

The recovery time you are specifying is way too ridiculous, people in one piece heal ridiculously fast if they didn't lose a limb or something, let alone someone with admiral level physique.

I would prefer a one piece or naruto fanfic without too much unearned power, rather using meta knowledge to obscene levels to get ahead, but if you have already planned the stories, then you do you ig.

bruh, why this same cliche, atleast make him capable enough to break contracts when he wants to, being a slave to a contract is cliche and sad no matter the outcome.

Can you send the raw or MTL link for this fiction?? ---------------- --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

can you give the raw link??

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Become hokage somehow

They are able to make pacifistas dude, mobile phones should be a piece of cake if they get the basic working idea.

Will the whole Ohara incident happen? Just wanted to know.

It's fantastic so far, no need to rewrite.

please don't make the story follow exactly the canon please, like yagura becoming mizukage and being controlled, The Rin situation etc.

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When will you be putting your own chapters in? the chapters so far is already in the og fanfiction right?

btw, what's your update schedule?

This is pretty good dude, don't drop.........................,..,................................................................................,

Foreign virus and all

yardrat I think makes way more sense.