Darth_foreskin

The only reason N/H happened was because Kishimoto is terrible at writing women anyway, not to mention the disaster that is sakura/Sasuke.

Raw name please...........................

chunins in naruto are incredibly weak after all.

I feel like you are nerfing naruto and underestimating the 8 gates way too much.

The recovery time you are specifying is way too ridiculous, people in one piece heal ridiculously fast if they didn't lose a limb or something, let alone someone with admiral level physique.

I would prefer a one piece or naruto fanfic without too much unearned power, rather using meta knowledge to obscene levels to get ahead, but if you have already planned the stories, then you do you ig.

bruh, why this same cliche, atleast make him capable enough to break contracts when he wants to, being a slave to a contract is cliche and sad no matter the outcome.

Can you send the raw or MTL link for this fiction?? ---------------- --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

can you give the raw link??

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