The novel over all was ruff and uninteresting from the weird writing style that hurt my eyes to read to the uninteresting characters and the mc that feels and acts like a side character I got all that from reading 10 chapters if I read more I would have to stab my own eyes to save myself
Overlord_Venus
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LIKEI usually read one novel at a time and a character with no ambition and only cares about survival is kinda boring no offense as far as your foreshadowing you blame it on the reader mabye you just did bad foreshadowing? I have read and enjoyed scifi novels before so that is null it's funny how you throw all the problems with your novel on the reader's
Overlord_Venus:?? Bro, if you are reading this while reading other novels, then, of course, you won't be able to enjoy it. This is a sci-fi novel, not a fantasy. As for the MC that doesn't have much role at the start, he's a 10-year-old kid in a superhuman society. Of course, he cannot do anything. His only goal is survival. The actual plot only starts from chapter 34. And, as I mentioned at the end of synopsis, a lot of stuff is foreshadowed throughout the chapters. So, if you are a typical webnovel reader, you won't be able to follow anything. If all you need is a simple fantasy novel with some interesting elements, you can check out my other novels. This prolly won't be to your taste.
?? Bro, if you are reading this while reading other novels, then, of course, you won't be able to enjoy it. This is a sci-fi novel, not a fantasy. As for the MC that doesn't have much role at the start, he's a 10-year-old kid in a superhuman society. Of course, he cannot do anything. His only goal is survival. The actual plot only starts from chapter 34. And, as I mentioned at the end of synopsis, a lot of stuff is foreshadowed throughout the chapters. So, if you are a typical webnovel reader, you won't be able to follow anything. If all you need is a simple fantasy novel with some interesting elements, you can check out my other novels. This prolly won't be to your taste.