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Because it isn't.
Problem with trials is: if you are implicated murder, and you can't prove self defense because you don't have money to burn, then you're just a murderer.
Wasn't she from around 300ish ch?
Anko?
Problem with that is he made it an absolute that you can pick one every 3 mins by climbing trees and one would fall every 10 mins, it doesn't matter if it grows on trees or not, if it means meeting the conditions would get you the same outcome.
Yet you would still sin.
Well to be fair, humanity didn't wear clothes because it's appropriate. We covered up, because of embarassment of learning what is inappropriate.
It's selfishness being removed not sin.
Even though the mc is vulgar, the last thing you could define him is hypocrisy, when he did everything he wanted without concealment. He's prideful, a bit dumb, but he never lied nor showed anything against his moral beliefs.
Having fillers are good, but having them after a cliffhanger is a no go. Also, we haven't even connected to that girl, she haven't even done anything and you gave her a flashback. đ
Lin Fan would be so proud of you.
Try to talk to soldiers who've had experienced war, and they'll tell you why killing is the last thing they want to do.
This feels so sarcastic ngl.
Chakra is formed from physical and spiritual energy. He just need to eat and rest to replenish it.
Ais likes heroes though. The only one that is like that is bell. All the women in danmachi liked bell for a reason. Here, they liked the mc without those said reasons.
It would've been better if the arrogance was born from a cumulative experience. Ex. When he first started killing goblins in the forest he'd feel great, but would've thought this was just the start. Then he started getting proficient with it so he challenges himself with more of them because he knew he'd survive with the blessing. He goes higher and challenge the stronger monsters in the surface. Every success gives him confidence , so when he finished training, he goes to orario, then get to the guild, thinking he's special because he is. At the very least better than most lvl 1s. Though he should have confidence by then, he still should have humility, because everything he fought outside aren't really that strong and just the tip of the iceberg. (Also, stating the limit of your character would just make the story predictable and dull) With this he should'nt have said what he said about loki, he should've been given more choices, and say he would think about it. So he goes to the dungeon, surprised that the monsters are worst than the surface, slower and mindless, he got disappointed, then when the 1 sp notif came, the sudden burst of arrogance would naturally come to him. Then, the story would just play out like so. Thing is, it's hard to read when there are sudden changes with the mc's personality. It takes out the immersion of reading because you just feel like something is wrong. If it's cumulative, we could just think I knew it was coming, but the sudden change is just too forceful and feel off putting.
"Irish twins"
He needs to be high profile to have influence. The author probably wants him to express confidence, and failed horribly, which in turn became haughtiness.
It's okay to have 500 question multiple choice exam in 4hrs, the problem is if it's right minus wrong.
Exactly my point. It's non-Fucking-existent. Like those limits he made for himself, because he might be over reliant about his Fucking skills.