Betterplayer

This book is honestly one of my top reads even though I almost didn't pick it up because of the underwhelming synopsis. So glad I gave it a test read though and now I am totally hooked and constantly refreshing to see if a new chapter was added. My only complaints are advanced reading is way too expensive for non-whales and the world is lacking a fully rounded feel with a lack of many allies, villains, or even filler characters with any unique talents other than the main character. Right now it feels like the main character is the only one in the world with a powerful ability. Dont need to be anywhere near the main character's level of uniqueness/power but I'd like to see the world be more "fair" in distribution talents.

Also your synopsis doesn't do your book justice. I would consider improving it to get more new readers. I almost didn't start reading because of it, but now I anxiously wait for chapters.

Love the story and I'm not sure if you'll read this but you might want to consider lowering the advanced reading cost. $40 a month is overboard considering its 20 chapters and you have to pay it to stay current every month. If I were independently wealthy I would definitely buy in but if you lower it then you might get alot more normal readers like me willing to buy in. Unless you have ALOT of whales supporting you then it would be more effective.

I have read some or all of hundreds of novels on webnovel. This is one of about 20 that have had me anxiously awaiting the next chapter. The other books are decent reads but this one has me hooked. Extraordinary world building with a pretty unique magic system. Character building and progression is exceptional. World building is focused on progression of the world's concept of magic and is unique beyond words imo. Right now this is my number 1 book and it kills me when the writer's real life interferes with chapter releases, but they always keep us informed.

I have read some or all of hundreds of novels on webnovel. This is one of about 20 that have had me anxiously awaiting the next chapter. The other books are decent reads but this one has me hooked. The reinvention of Arthurian lore is truly well done and mingles well with the author's adaptation of world building "dimensions".

Am I wrong or was the girl only 12 at the start? If he stays less than 2 years she's no more than 14 now. Might want to go through and change all your numbers to a longer time ratio. Won't change the story as the ending is fast forward anyway but makes it not seem like a pedophile.

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Interesting and fairly unique concepts of a magic academy. Characters are well rounded and main character advancement is leading toward then op but taking the right amount of time to get there.

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