goes to mass effect not marvel lol sorry typo

crysis effect, a crossover , character from crysis goes to marvel, decent stuff. nothing greeaat but decent. goggle it, it has 2 parts in fanfiction . com

number one fanfic in this website* i think i deleted that part, or its some sort o bug.

3 stars overall score, why? because author decide to have 3 chapters with 3 different personality for the mc. He says that he will get revenge blah blah blah but its just a clear edgelord type of fanfic. Also, this is cliche galore, honestly, its a bit better than other webnovels here but not that much. Writing quality 4 stars- why? because its decent compared to other webnovels here, author leaves comments in chapters that are almost the same size as the whole chapter but yeah, oh and pls plsplsplspls send powerstones to the guy , wtf man are you thanos or what?~ updates-5 stars i dont think that he misses a update since he has written chapters in advance and at this point i dont care... Story- Have you ever ever ever in your entire writing carreer the phrase SHOW DON´T TELL ? World Background- cliche , and not tastefully done cliche like you expect someone who wrote a fanfic with almost 200 chapter about the same freaking world. Honestly dissapointed and more dissapointed since this is freaking number one fanfic in here, like wtf?

Im just trying to help you out but you really need to renake this chapter if you want more viewers, i think this is the 3 time i clicked on your fanfic just to stop reading here because of this kindergarten dialogue format. Its just my opinion take it how you will.

From what movie ?

No romance till chap 40 but i think it will have romance, the way the plot goes... :D BTW its a very good fanfic, not very good in first chapters but it gets better, for those who are hesitating.

Exactly, writing quality is pretty good the rest is just a mess im at chapter 73 and i regret i wasted my time. The start was so good, with his mentality and all of that, it just transforms into a harem seeking protagonist... I was expecting more with that start, totally disappointing.

Thanks i was actually just about to click read button but not now, good day to you.

Thanks, i didnt know he wrote the elder witcher fanfic i dropped that too.

----------------MASSIVE SPOILER ------------- What did happen? After he loses his hand and author nerfed him i dropped but now i was thinking of giving a shot, now i read you review and i dont want to waste time, so can you tell me why? thanks

Why you dont have more upvotes? This is freaking true, i think it was at chapter 200+ when i stopped reading, he goes hiding and overcomes the obstacle, 1,2 chapters of relative peace , guess what another obstacle appears and he hides, and thats not all, what does the mc do? train and become stronger? No, he helps his friends because 5 ants can kill a freaking elephant that type of analogy. Thats why i dont invest my time and money in this novel.

hey to you too

First review so lets get it going. W.Q - Its pretty well written without grammar mistakes as far as i can see. The problem are interactions between characters, more show dont tell type of thing. oh, and the formatting its a bit clunky lets say, too much text without paragraphs .. etc S.U - No problems here , 1 update per day or something like that its very good for a fanfic, S.D - Very good i like where this is going and honestly it always keeps me at edge and waiting for more. C.D - Pretty nicely fleshled out protagonist notinh to comment here, the only problem i have a the other characters, you need to make me( as a reader) care for them or have an emotion about them , basically what i have to say is that sometimes it cames as boring or stale character and i lose interest but nothing alarming. W.B - Witcher . Nothing to say here.The character ( you know who) you added its a good addition and something in the likes of Gaunther O´Dimm. TLDR - Its a good story and i honestly hope to see you succed in completing this story. Witcher Fanfics are rare and a good fanfic are even harder to find. Thank you for the amazing work , and keep at it, i always (when i remember) vote for your work. Sorry for misspelng but im pretty tired and hopefully you can understand what im tring to say.

i was just writing a example, you cant make mc suddenly have those breakthrough and make all those new inventions ( basically you are showing that at a very young age mc is smarter that a lot of wizards that are almost 10 times his body age) and make a mistake like telling his friends his secretes, if he was THAT smart , he would have solved the conflict in a subtle way without endangering anyone. You have to decide if he is 11y.o or 11y.o+his previous life. Its a very inconsistent mc. Its impossible for some species that live almost double our age to not have the curiosity and drive to learn more.

This was getting way out of control, not explaining MC´s sudden shift in personality or if he was so smart he could have stopped the animal in a more peaceful/subtle way or the whole explaining to his friends which will put them under a lot of stress/danger. and what about the whole primitive way of thinking of wizards? i get it that some of them are like that but you cant honestly expect me that they still think earth is on center and the sun is orbiting around us, if a society is like that a lot of things would have been very different. This is pretty good fanfic, which i would have liked to see finished but it has so many plot holes that is a chore to actually read it....