Review Detail of Beastlyyy in The Witcher: Of Serpents and Blood

First review so lets get it going. W.Q - Its pretty well written without grammar mistakes as far as i can see. The problem are interactions between characters, more show dont tell type of thing. oh, and the formatting its a bit clunky lets say, too much text without paragraphs .. etc S.U - No problems here , 1 update per day or something like that its very good for a fanfic, S.D - Very good i like where this is going and honestly it always keeps me at edge and waiting for more. C.D - Pretty nicely fleshled out protagonist notinh to comment here, the only problem i have a the other characters, you need to make me( as a reader) care for them or have an emotion about them , basically what i have to say is that sometimes it cames as boring or stale character and i lose interest but nothing alarming. W.B - Witcher . Nothing to say here.The character ( you know who) you added its a good addition and something in the likes of Gaunther O´Dimm. TLDR - Its a good story and i honestly hope to see you succed in completing this story. Witcher Fanfics are rare and a good fanfic are even harder to find. Thank you for the amazing work , and keep at it, i always (when i remember) vote for your work. Sorry for misspelng but im pretty tired and hopefully you can understand what im tring to say.