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2017-12-20 JoinedCroatia
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  • Suken
    Suken1yr
    Posted

    it has started again!!!! thank God it has started again. This novel is the best novel just to relax and binge read. tha characters are simple but there is depth. Even if iit's just making movies in a fantasy world there is a real depth in the world and i must say it's really good.just read it you won't be dissatisfied.

    altalt
    Bringing Culture to a Different World
    Fantasy · Sister's Bride
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  • Suken
    Suken3yr
    Posted

    This will be a simple review. The whole novel for novel is great it has a great story progression cool cooking stuff the main character is also great the side characters are amazing and you can feel that they have a unique personality. The romance in it is also great and has a good flow and its sweet. The only problem on Webnovel is that it is locked so soon and with so little chapters its hard to understand why this novel is so great. It would be nice that Webnovel starts unlocking chapters after some time for free so that the author can earn even more. Unlocking 1-3 chapters per week and after people get hooked they would maybe pay to read it.

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  • Suken
    Suken3yr
    Replied to SiegV

    I must agree on Larkinson so true he had a great story. He acted like a idiot so that he could get their guard to drop. Its not a bad character ark. I think i know where the novel went wrong it tried to be allot of things. Mech designer, system, technician, factory owner, action, drama behind the scenes plotting, aliens, other worlds exploration, online game, allot of characters it has allot of going on but falls short in all of the aspects.

    altalt
    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • Suken
    Suken3yr
    Posted

    Ok this is really hard to review. The story is good i cant say otherwise but for me its just to much ill just say it started great but then it kind off lost it? I cant really explain. The second thing i don't like is the MC. He has no character at all. And when he shows some kind of progress it comes sudden like where the hell did he pull that personality out. He has no trait that distinguishes him from the rest like watching Eggs. They are all the same with slight differences. I read about 700+ ch but i have no desire to read more of it. But i must say its a great idea and the author is amazing but at some point it started to become a chore and annoying to read it so i'm dropping this.

    altalt
    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • Suken
    Suken3yr
    Posted

    I drooped it the moment i have seen how he treats the Dog. I don't wanna continue to read it. The character is show how you treat animals and the first thing i thought after the incident ( no spoiler really it just happens in the first 10 ch.) is that the MC is a ass*ole and could not get over it.

    altalt
    Everybody is Kung Fu Fighting, While I Started a Farm
    Eastern · Oof
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  • Suken
    Suken3yr
    Commented

    Does anyone know what happened to the author?

    Ch 40 New Year
    altalt
    Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top
    Urban · Elawn
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