
I'm an author that has a lot of things on his mind, and for now I'm experimenting with different stories. I hope that soon I will try to make a completely original story when I get the inspiration.
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ok...now this and the last chapter dangerously look and feel like it was generated by AI. i hope im wrong. the feelings of Iris and Isaiah are just spining in circles. Diana: "Iris! Look at you. You’re so big!" "The place looks good," she said."It’s the same as it was two years ago." its like repeating. I dont mind if someone uses AI to edit things but now its just feels like the chapter is fully made by AI.
I need my FIX. Where is my fix????
Nope im done this novel is confusing as hell.
I have NO freaking idea WTF is going on in this novel. The writing is confusing as hell
how do you seduce a car?
The Novels Extra, My Housea Of Horrors
Tales of demons and goods, Gourmet of another world, God of coking
Thanks Author. that makes it so much fun. Again amazing Nobel you got a fan.
Oh well then i got it wrong. It was becuse the memory in the Prologue. The coffe incident. That was a STRONG indication that she is the gril. But i guess wrong. And that was not nice off you to bait like that! But oh well. BTW Thank you Author for a grat story.
4.58… 4.58??? Who on earth gave this a 4.58? This novel is unbelievably bad. I don’t even have the words to fully describe how frustrating it is. The premise is actually somewhat interesting at first, but the more you read, the more obvious it becomes that the story is incredibly weak. It relies heavily on forced, unintelligent drama and repetitive, over-the-top conflicts that make it painful to get through. At times, it honestly feels like it was written by a child. The main character is unbelievably foolish, and the number of illogical events is staggering. You start to wonder how characters this incompetent are supposed to be wealthy or successful in the story. And the drama—don’t even get me started. It’s absurd to the point of parody. Imagine taking the most exaggerated elements of Indian, Turkish, and Korean dramas, mashing them together, and then amplifying everything to the extreme. That’s what this feels like. As for the characters, they aren’t just one-dimensional—they have no depth at all. There’s no development, no nuance, nothing to make you care about them. Everything is exaggerated, completely illogical, and exhausting to read. I pushed through until the locked chapters, and honestly, I regret the time I spent on it. I wouldn’t recommend this to anyone.