Can we please get some actually good translators for trial reads? the translations on almost all of these recently are horrible even though more interesting premises have been coming out.

Good story imo, Reason for the bad rating though is because the story is completed and yet privelage chapters arent being released. Privelage chapters are supposed to be stockpiled chapters that you can pay for if you want to read them early, not required, and yet its been a month since this story ended and yet they're keeping the last 30 or so chapters locked under the extremely expensive privilege system. please fix this or im just gonna take this as another reason why this site is so horrbile.

Tf does this even mean? the wording is so confusing.

The terminology on this is weird. Is it not a power? why are powers/skills called 'tools'? Makes it sound like its an object

Petition to never bring back world of dieties. Anyone who agrees should reply to either mine or Grandmist_Sage's post and like either post aswell. No take-backs.

PLEASE NOTE: This was a stupid review, why even bother posting it if the first chapter hadn't even come out yet. Also iirc you cant update novel reviews so now you are stuck with your 1.5 star review on a novel you haven't even read. Just delete this worthless review already

Its not racism, its just how the culture defines peoples preferences. For example, I'm extremely attracted to red-heads; Would that make me 'hairist' for not being as attracted to people with other colors of hair? Chinese culture for as long as can be has put importance on 'fair' skin, so thats how the beauty standards are set in the culture.

As an ex-editor, I have a developed a skill to find 95% of grammatical and writing flaws, so that's something I cant just ignore.

Please fix the improper grammar from "u" to "you" and "managed" to "manage". This is such a disappointment.

This novel was finally picked, so I decided to give it a chance and read it. I now understand why no editor wanted to pick this up. The grammar is horrendous. Whichever group or person translated these 60 trial chapters, please don't use them anymore. The wording is too janky, The dialogue makes it seem like 5 year olds are talking, every other paragraph has a poorly structured run on sentence. I know most of the webnovel community doesn't care much for proper grammar and wording or else vampire system wouldn't have been at the top of the rankings for the past half year, but come on guys; This is unbearable to read.

I cant be bothered to read anymore. The plot has promise and potential, but the writing quality seemed to dip after the first few chapters and the grammar is now low quality and super unprofessional. You probably hired and editor for the first few chapters or just got lazy with editing, so please hire an editor to fix all your really unprofessional writing. A good example is the ending of chapter 15 "Alex panicked... (noooo... my Evoooo...)" That's way too many ellipses in one line and the (noooo... my Evoooo...) part is super weird and unprofessional.

This is a super late reply, but seeing as how I'm coming back a month later just to reminisce on this novel because of its phenomenal world building disproves your statement. Sure the introduction is trash and the author could have chosen a better way to go about it, but afterwards everything was above average. World building was the best I'd seen in a while.

I wish Qidian still told us who the translators are so we could boycott them after dropping novels like this. Its a shame this novel was dropped, I stopped reading for a few months to let the chapters build up, come back and waddaya know.

Thats because the speedforce also insanely increases the flash's mental speed. Example:

But people have actually found the remains of atlantis irl, and its was the eye of the sahara desert in africa. It just dried up instead of the fantasy that it sank into the ocean.

isn't it kinda sad that the only way china can feel better about their technology in comparison to other countries is through fiction?

People forget the movie apparently. There are only side effects to NZT-48 if you use it too much and get addicted. The movie even shows the MC slowly waning himself off it, and at the end, he retains his super intelligence without having to take it anymore. I'd 100% pick either NZT or the chronicle substance

No, its not "perfectly readable". Its only slightly better than MTL. there are multiple times where i had to go back and re-read segments or entire chapters because some things made no sense the way they were worded. Its all very unprofessional, and it'd be understandable if one character said "lol" instead of laughing as a character quirk, but they almost all do, which is very unrealistic, unprofessional, and immersion breaking, its very poor writing in the state that it is now, giving it 3 stars was being generous.

I enjoy the story, it'd be a 4.5 star review... if it weren't for the fact that the translation/editing makes it seem like this is MTL. The grammar is horrible, awful wording choices, many sentences dont even make sense. instead of characters saying "haha" or being described as laughing, they say "lol" almost wish this was MTL'd instead of whoever did this awful job. Even though I like the story, im kinda rooting for this to not be picked from the trial reads unless they re-edit or re-translate all these 60 chapters