I'm a guy that always dreams incredible complex stories, and then forgets about them after 3 chapters.
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Actually @caivincent , I thought more about it and decided you are right, I wrote and moved back a chapter that handles the transition.
Shameless routine self review. Who will like this novel: People who played games such as x-com, people that enjoy strategy, action, sci-fi and a little bit of horror/thriller. People who won't like this novel: Harem fans, gooners. But seriously, I'm trying to write a decent defend earth against impossible odds, and I hope you'll enjoy it.
just a small time skip, you'll get a summary of what has happened behind the scenes in 3 chapters time.
Nothing special or praise worthy. Read the first 7 chapters, and there is basically no premise, overly wordy when nothing is happening and we don’t even get an image of the world. What we know: the mc has gone from a world to another that is exactly the same plus maybe the existence of supernatural, how and when did this happen? We don’t know, it’s just stated. How does he look? Where does he live, what kind of life, anything about him? We don’t know. Anything about the “game”, the world or any characters? Nope, nothing happens or it happens outside the camera. I would give 1 to everything, but the translator still did a decent job so i don’t feel like giving him a bad score.
This is pure , unadulterated nonsense, whoever wrote this should feel sad. I gave up at chapter 4. It feels as if a chinese author wrote a chinese mc, then decided that the mc is from the west, even though everything is still chinese. Plot makes little to no sense, the style is garbage and I’m constantly wondering what is going on.
Agreed. Either you do what you can to reintegrate a person, or you root out the problem definetly, half measures just lead to more problems.
Hi mon ami, good news, i’m coming back home tomorrow, allow me a little bit of rest and i’ll start posting agai.
3 done, one last to go on the 12
It would have actually been quite a twist, and it’s not like I can’t use it…