This is a collection of thoughts after reading some online novels of different genre and chapter progress along with personal point of view.
These criticisms are not pointed to the authors of the respective novels, rather it is a reminder for myself when I choose to re-read a few novels in my freetime.

Shanghai.
There were countless transparent raindrops linking the sky and the earth. On the street, colorful umbrellas started to appear like mushrooms and wound along the street.
Jiangnan's plum rain season had arrived, and the sun had not appeared for a very long time. The continuous rainy days made the air extremely humid. For an open-door business, such weather was obviously unwelcome.
However, the one who was troubled was the boss. To the ordinary worker, sales did not mean as much. Whether they sold more or sold less, the money they received was all around the same. When there were fewer customers, they were quite relaxed, and they could take the opportunity to be lazy.
There were many people that liked it when it rained, like the group of people that owned cars. Rain meant they had a free car wash.
In the rain, a limousine quietly stopped by the roadside.
The driver that also acted as the bodyguard came down from the cab, opened the umbrella, respectfully opened the back door, and held the umbrella out for the person in the car. The driver paid no regard to the rain falling down his back.
A leather shoe stepped into the shallow puddle by the curb. After that, another leather shoe followed.
Li Yuanfei got out of the car and buttoned the button in front of his suit. He raised his eyes to look at his surroundings.
It was a very normal street in Shanghai, located in the transitional zone between the commercial center and the residential area. There were some fashionable brand stores nearby. The brands were not top-notch, but they had good reputations.
In front of him was a pet shop. It was a direct store under his Stars pet chain supermarket. Its exquisite decorations did not lose much compared to other boutiques nearby. Its brand new signs were washed bright by the rainwater.
White-collared ladies and teenage girls passed by with umbrellas. They cast burning gazes when they saw the luxurious car and Li Yuanfei, who was in high spirits.
"Boss, do you need me to follow you in?" The driver that doubled as the bodyguard carried the umbrella, sending him to the covered doorway.
"There's no need." Li Yuanfei valued his words like gold.
The automatic doors separated to the left and right, and he walked into the shop.
The driver quietly returned to the side of the luxury car, waiting quietly for him to come back.
Compared to the cold wind and rain outside, the warmth and humidity inside were just right, causing people to feel like a huge burden was lifted off of them.
There was a mat to rub their feet on at the door and the floor was clean, but it also showed that customers were scarce because of the continuous rain. When he walked into the shop, he left a string of shallow footprints. No shop assistant came to wipe them off immediately, but perhaps that was a little too extravagant.
The layout of the shop was concise, but not simple. It was mainly pure white in color. It tried to cater to the cold and mild Japanese style favored by metropolitan, fashionable women. The first half was the pet supply area, the second half was the pet sale area, and there was even a playground for the children beside the door.
The cashier raised his head to look at him but did not recognize him. He welcomed him, as was the official procedure, before he continued to chat in the QQ group of chain stores on the computer. After all, the distance between the lowest level workers and him was quite far.
At that moment, there were only two or three customers sitting on the sofas and resting. Rather than actually shopping for pet supplies, they were instead just avoiding the rain.
Li Yuanfei took a quick glance at the products on the shelves. There was nothing to criticize. Whatever was necessary was there, and he walked towards the most central part of the pets section. Even though the pet products took most of the space, the position of the pets themselves was even more important.
The display cabinets in the pet area displayed cats, dogs, and other pets in different categories. The prices were arranged in descending order. The most beautiful and valuable pets were placed in the front so that customers could see them first.
Li Yuanfei took a quick look and saw an employee sitting cross-legged. He was concentrated on using his phone, so Li Yuanfei coughed lightly and used his finger joint to knock on the class of the display case of the English Shorthair. He asked, "May I ask what kind of cat this is?"
Of course, he knew what kind of cat it was. At that moment, he suddenly wanted to have a random inspection on how the chain store was run and the attitude in which they treated their customers. Before that, no one was warned.
The employee took a look, then quickly lowered his head again to stare at his phone. He spat out, "English Shorthair."
Li Yuanfei frowned in a way that was not easy to see and asked again, "What is special about this cat? Can you introduce it to me?"
The employee's face flashed with obvious irritation, as if he was reluctant to be disturbed. Li Yuanfei guessed that he was probably playing a game on his mobile phone.
He walked over lazily, staring at the English Shorthair. He casually answered, "Using simple terms, the most unique part of the English Shorthair is how 'circular' it is: its eyes are circular; its face is circular; its claws are circular; the tip of its tail is circular; its torso is circular. Its personality is warm and obedient, and it is suitable to be kept by an ordinary family."
Li Yuanfei was shocked and happy. He did not think that the employee, who looked particularly lazy, could somehow summarize the English Shorthair's specialties so well. He had used the simplest and easiest words to introduce it to the customer.
"Brother, you are very professional. Do you learn details about pets on a regular basis?" he questioned tentatively. He had already made a decision in his mind. If the employee gave a positive answer, he would greet the manager of the store and promote him to assistant manager. After all, the low-level employees who liked to learn were too rare to be buried.
"So-so." The shop employee scratched his head. It could have been that he saw that Li Yuanfei was dressed very well and he did not want him to look down on him. He answered truthfully, "That's what's written in the book."
"Oh? You saw it in a book? What book?" Li Yuanfei asked, interested. "Is it a pet magazine or a book you bought in the bookshop concerning pets?"
The store employee shook his head. "It was written in an online novel."
His response was not what Li Yuanfei had anticipated. He was shocked momentarily. "…An online novel introduced the unique points of the English Shorthair?"
"You don't believe it? I was just reading it just now… Here, it's this paragraph." The store employee took his phone out from his pocket and flipped to the chapter he was referring to, letting Li Yuanfei see the words on the screen.
Li Yuanfei was intrigued and grabbed the phone to take a look.
The phone screen was full of words, and it seemed to really be an online novel. One of the paragraphs introduced the special features of the English Shorthair. It was exactly the same thing that the store employee had just said.
So that was how it was…
Li Yuanfei was a bit disappointed. After all, compared with professional reference books, online fiction had a lower level. He hardly ever read online fiction. The impression of online fiction was that it was all about killing in a different world or fighting in a city and getting girls. On the private bookshelf of his office were all the biographies of famous businessmen and historical celebrities in the country and abroad.
He had already gotten rid of the idea of promoting the employee to the assistant manager, but as an employee of a pet shop, reading an online story about pets was more meaningful than reading pornographic books, right?
Then, another thought flashed through his mind: It was impossible to expect unambitious, lower level employees to learn and improve on their own initiative, but could he improve the quality of grassroots employees by means of teaching in a way they enjoyed?
Such as… Li Yuanfei took a look at that employee again. No matter where the employee's knowledge came from, it indeed would be able to increase the experience of a customer's shopping experience.
"How is that online novel written? Is it meaningful?" he asked, pretending to be very interested.
He simply looked through several pages and found that no matter what the story was, at least the pet knowledge mentioned in the novel was basically correct, which was already very rare for an online novel.
"Haha, I find that it is quite meaningful. I recommend that you read it!" The employee was obviously a fan of online fiction. He was suddenly spirited. He gushed and said, "I am also an old bookworm. This is the first time I have seen online fiction describing real pets! At first, the website recommended it to me and I refused, but recently there's been a book shortage. Now that I'm working in a pet shop, I thought it would be okay to see how the author fabricated the story. After I looked, however, it seemed that it was not like that, so I continued to read it. The only thing is that the author is relatively short and powerless…"
Li Yuanfei smiled as he listened. He thought, You are holding an employee pass for a pet shop and you are recommending online novels to customers. Is that suitable?
But he was already disappointed, and right now, he did not have much hope that the level of the employee was very high. He followed the flow and asked, "Is it? It sounds quite good. I also quite like pets… What is the content of this book? Can you explain it to me?"
"No problem!" The employee said. "In short, it's in a place called Binhai City. A man nicknamed 'Huo' downloaded a mobile game to capture elfins by chance, and then caught elfins everywhere. It just happened that he was running a pet shop…"
"What did you say? Repeat it again!" The employee was suddenly seized by the collar by Li Yuanfei. He was totally confused. What kind of stimulation did the elegant man in front of him have that caused his face to turn so vicious in the twinkling of an eye? He hoped that he was not an intermittent manic patient that had escaped from a psychiatric hospital.
"Who are you? Let me go!" He was reluctant to admit his weakness and wanted to remove Li Yuanfei's hand from his shirt collar.
"What is happening? Why did you start a fight with the customer?" Right at that moment, the store manager of the shop walked out. At first, he had only seen the back of Li Yuanfei and had thought that he was just an ordinary employee. When he walked in front of them and saw Li Yuanfei's face, he was instantly so shocked that his face became the color of mud.
"Boss… Boss Li, why are you here today?" The store manager turned around and pushed the employee to the side, exasperated at his failure to do good. "Boy, open your dog eyes wide and look clearly! Who is this? This is the big boss of our company!"
The employee shrank his neck in fear, but still whispered in disobedience, "So what if he's the boss? He was the first to make a move…"
"You still dare to speak?" The store manager was so angry he wanted to vomit blood.
"It was really like that! He took my phone and hasn't returned it to me!" The employee put his neck on the line. In his heart he thought that he would just resign and return to his hometown, but he needed his phone back at least. It was the new Apple phone that he had bought with months worth of savings.
The store manager pointed at the doorway and was just about to tell the employee he was fired when his hand was pressed down by Li Yuanfei.
Li Yuanfei took a deep breath, straightened his clothes, then shook his head lightly. He walked over to return the phone to the employee and apologized. "I'm sorry, it was me who lost my composure just now. Let me apologize to you. I'm willing to pay you for your losses."


1. Download a suspicious game
2. Catch a few magical pets as partners
3. Go through interesting daily routines and lead the pet shop to a whole new level

Hello everyone, i think it is time to stop with this novel, because I have no motivation to write further. I began to write this novel, because I wanted to learn how it feels to write a novel and being an author. This was also my first novel I wrote. With this novel I only wrote without thinking, because it was only for getting experience and having fun. The time passed and i got better, maybe you noticed it. I know sometimes i wrote incoherent things, but it was because it was the first thing that came to my mind and i did not gave importance. I also began to write a second and a third novel, both were well planed and were better than this one. I also began to put the second one online and I even got a contract offered by Webnovel, but because my target is not to earn money, i declined the offer. 
I think now it is the time to stop with this novel definitely and concentrate on the other two, so thank you for reading my novel till now, without you I would not have become this good in English, compared to my level of English at the beginning, i am now much better.
Thank you for everything and Bye.

Haytam, a normal teenager from a normal family from earth had a car crash. After the car crash, Haytam died and transmigrate to a cultivation world, 
with the most perfect system that existed ever.
Haytam will travel over this new world and enjoy his life to the maximum, to find new friends and the love he always wanted.

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Hello everyone, I am the author of this novel. This is the first time I write a novel and I hope you understand what it means, if I do a mistake or think something could be better, than write it to me, I will try my best to improve it. Enjoy my novel and thank you for reading.

- If this article is very tough to understand, then you need to improve your English for at least a few weeks before writing a novel in English. I'm no English expert.

Story Target: 
Know what type of story you are writing before writing it.
- If you plan to make the mc overpowered, or evil(or 'good', but a murderer), go for it but be clear on this at the beginning. 
- If you plan to make someone change their character from good to evil or opposite, it is good to plan this out at the beginning.
- It's exciting for a reader when they think the story is ending, but then the MC goes to a new place for a new adventure, so try and create a vast world to explore with lots of detail, places like seas and mountains. A part of the storyline could be in an underwater/underground kingdom, on a plateau, etc.
- Don't explain the structure of the whole world at the beginning of the book. Have the MC only know a bit about his location, and let the reader learn new things about the world with the MC.
- This is just an extra(it is not a must-have for a good novel, but I like it): Have a well thought out plot. Rather than bad guys sending thugs or hurting innocents while the MC goes around beating them up throughout the novel, plan out a more intricate scheme. I love to read moments when it feels like everything is going wrong, but it was all part of the plan. And this 'plan' shouldn't be some hidden power coming out and saving the day. Try to have characters solve problems by using their heads instead of brute force sometimes too. 

Clearly defined arcs
- Arcs should be well-defined with a beginning and end chapter.
- Arcs should be small(can range from 40 - 200 chapters based on your chapter length and the length of your entire novel). A significant arc can be longer, but the author can divide it into smaller sub-arcs. 
- Each arc should end with the tying up of some loose ends. Leaving too many loose ends(running storylines) could result in the reader losing track
- It's nice to hint some things early in the novel and then have them impact the story later, but only one or two characters(enemies and allies included) should be in this 'hinted' state, or we readers forget about them, which goes against the reason for the hint.
- It is ok to bring in new characters at crucial points in the story(like when the MC is close to death, etc.). However, doing this too much can make the plot armour too strong.

Good English
- Use Grammarly. This is very important. Grammarly is a software that will automatically correct most of your spelling and grammar errors.
- Language(grammar) is important. If your English isn't good, try taking some classes or asking a friend with good English to edit. Grammarly can help a lot here. 
- Sometimes re-reading your chapter helps you find a lot of mistakes(as what happened when I re-read this guide).
- Fluctuate sentences, making some long and some short to avoid exhausting a leader 
- Most sentences should be on the shorter side
- Sentences using conjunctions like 'and' many times are examples of those that could be split up.
- Obviously, follow the basic grammar rules, but also look into some higher-level language guidelines. There are great tips online on how to write well. Take the time to go through these, and try consciously implementing these in your novel.
- Capitalization: Always capitalize the first word of a sentence, and always capitalize the name of anyone or anything. 
- Never capitalize an entire word. Using italics, bold, full stops, commas, new lines, or capitalizing the first letter to emphasize but capitalized words are irritating to read. At most, you can capitalize loud sound effects like BAM! or THUD! but WRITING SENTENCES LIKE THIS IS ANNOYING.
- I'll write it again for emphasis. Use Grammarly. 

Chapter Updates:
- Premium: Charging for chapters is natural, and you deserve it for your work. But, try leaving the first 100 chapters free to get readers interested. Yes, readers might get the gist of your novel in the first five chapters, but they need to be more immersed in your story to spend money. Of course, 100 is an arbitrary number based on the average chapter length I've seen for such novels. If your chapters are longer, naturally, you know best. I would suggest two arcs as a good amount to leave free. 
- The faster, the better is true. The more chapters you release, the happier us readers will be, except if:
-- The rush to release chapters results in subpar chapters. Be careful of the tradeoff. Quality matters. While readers would like fast updates, there's no point if they don't like the novel itself. 
-- For translations, two chapters a day is a great speed. More than that seems sloppy.
-- For originals, 1 chapter a day is the max you should publish(unless your chapters are incredibly short). And even that seems like a lot to me. It takes time to write good stuff, so churning out hundreds of chapters super quick often means its not good work.


Breaking up the chapter into small paragraphs: 
- Leave two lines between paragraphs. This not only makes your novel seem a lot cleaner and easier to read, but it also makes chapters seem way longer ;P. 
- Large paragraphs should be written only when extremely necessary, where you have to describe a single aspect of something in detail. 
Giving someone's background, or explaining some part of the story or logic are not good things to write as big paragraphs. For these, an easy fix is to start a new paragraph every 3-4 sentences. It may seem trivial, but it makes a significant difference while reading.

A guideline for authors who are new to the business, written by a fan and veteran webnovel reader. These tips are what I think shows the basic quality of a novel, apart from its story. 

Recently, lots of originals have been popping up, and I have noticed that while they have great potential and exciting storylines and settings, the good aspects are buried in errors that could easily be corrected.

Authors, please give it a read. Of course, you will have your own thoughts and difficulties following these guidelines, but I feel that by following as many as you can, your novel will be more liked. Thank you!

Fellow readers as well as Authors, please feel free to mention other tips I can add to this guide to make it more detailed. I am happy to listen to your opinions on changes that can be made to my current guide.

First, let me thank you guys for stepping in and read my novel, whether you like it or not it is a great encouragement for me as this is the very first novel that I wrote. 
As everyone know 2020 has been a terrible year, devastating things happened and everyone in the globe is put under a lock down for months. It just feels like everything has slowed down, all daily life routines and activities are put to a stop, and all plans are forced to change.
It affected me as well, I am supposed to be enlisted into the army but it got postponed until the end of September, while my plan for travelling overseas to North Korea, Iran, Turkey, Greece and Italy are also put to an abrupt stop.
So, during the four months of lock down, I decided to not put my time in waste and developed an interest in reading books, especially Antiquity and Medieval history books. Through this four months of reading, I developed an enormous interest in the Roman Civilisation and her history, and so while reading, I began to wonder what would have happened if an alternate line of history took place, like in this case, East Roman Empire, or Byzantium, did not fall in 1453, but continued to survive?
The thought of it became stronger after I wandered across this website and found out that I can share my work online, I grabbed my pen and started brainstorming.
And so, I created this novel, I began hours after hours of research to make it more 'historically accurate' like the events, the people, the geographical location etc. I must admit that having the ideas is one thing but putting it in words is another thing. I understand my boundaries also, I have never written anything like this before. I bet that my dear English Literature teacher would have rolled on floor laughing if she reads my work.
Thanks for listening to me. If you have any corrections or ideas, or you want yourself as a character in this novel, please put it in the comments. I will be constantly updating the novel till it finish perhaps next year, so please place it in your library to give me more motivation along the way, thanks! (*≧∀≦*)
With that…let us take the time machine to go back before the Siege of Constantinople takes place.

AD1453, a year that divides Medieval and Modern.
Caused by the fall of one city.
Her name is Constantinople.
Stood there for one thousand years.
Strong and firm as always.
Persistent against all foes that dreamed to take her.
But tonight, everything changes.
The young sultan on the outside.
And the old emperor on the inside.
Guns fired, woman weeps, men yells.
They pray to god, for god will send them a saviour.
To save both the falling city, and their helpless souls.
In the twist of history, god answered their call.
For god has sent them a new emperor.
Antonius, came from the seas.
Who shall lead the Romans.
Back to another peak.
And end the terrible fate of the city.
In the year 1453.

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AD1453, as the city of Constantinople prepares for its final fate, a pirate captain and crew sailed into the golden horn, history made an abrupt turn from this point onward....

Discord: https://discord.gg/eZKHzjNZz9

At night.
At Zhang Ye's parents' house.
Zhang Ye and Wu Zeqing brought Sisi over.
When his mother came up to them, she held her hand over her son's forehead.
Zhang Ye said, "What are you doing, Mom?"
His mother said, "I'm checking to see if you have a fever."
Zhang Ye said, "Why would I have a fever?"
His mother asked, "So it's true then, what they said on the news?"
His father also said in dismay, "You're really trying to get the Nobel Prize?"
"Yeah," Zhang Ye replied in a casual tone.
His mother said in a speechless manner, "Rascal, is something wrong with you?"
Sisi tilted her head in response and said, "Daddy is awesome!"
His mother rolled her eyes and said, "Your daddy might be awesome, but that's the Nobel Prize. No Chinese person has ever gotten it before. All the online news articles are calling your daddy arrogant for wanting to get it."
Sisi was having none of it. "They're all baddies!"
Wu Zeqing laughed. She patted her daughter on the head and said, "Yes, your daddy is the most awesome. Just wait until Daddy brings home the Nobel Prize and show them."
Sisi nodded happily. "Mhm! Mhm!"
Zhang Ye said happily, "Don't give Daddy so much pressure. I'm only going to try for it. I can't be sure I'll get it."
Wu Zeqing said, "Just give it a shot."
Zhang Ye smiled and said, "That's what I mean. Let's see how the book sales do first."
Even though the Nobel Prize in Literature was not awarded based on a novel's sales figures, since that would make the existence of the committee pointless, the sales figures would definitely still affect the consideration of who it was awarded to. Oh, so if your novel had a circulation of 10,000 copies around the world, and no one had even read it before or even knew who you were, how could the Nobel Prize possibly be presented to you? There would have to be at least a large enough basis in sales for the world to know about you, giving you the chance to break into the international scene. And this was exactly what Zhang Ye was lacking at the moment. And taking a 1,000 steps back, so to speak, even if Zhang Ye didn't manage to get the Nobel Prize at the end of it all, if this book could hit a certain sales figure globally, it would still give Zhang Ye's popularity a great boost and get him closer to the international scene.
There was still a month until the Nobel Prizes were given out.
But just how would the international audience react to this top ten masterpiece of a novel from his previous world?
Would they accept it?
Or would they reject it?
Would they give it recognition?
Or would they disapprove of it?
It would either silently fade away.
Or become a bestseller across the world.
Zhang Ye knew that these were the only two outcomes for Gone with the Wind in this world. There wouldn't be a third possibility of it performing lukewarmly, so he was waiting, waiting for a result!
…
America.
At a college town.
"North, why haven't I seen you around the past couple days?"
"Oh, hey, Alice. I've been reading a book."
"What book? That has you so hooked?"
"It's a great read! I recommend you read it."
"What's it called?"
"Gone with the Wind."
"Eh? This book again?"
"What do you mean?"
"Ricky also recommended it to me."
"He read it too?"
"Since so many people have recommended it, it should be pretty good. I'll buy a copy too then."
…
Canada.
On social media.
"Recommending a book! It's a great read!"
"What book?"
"Gone with the Wind! It was recently published!"
"I've never heard of it. Who's the author?"
"Someone called Zhang Ye. I've never heard of this person before either."
"That's an unknown writer, so it's probably a newcomer, right?"
"But the book is so good. I've never read such an amazing book before! I have a feeling that this book will down in history!"
"Seriously?"
"It's such a great book! You guys will understand after reading it!"
"I'll go and buy a copy."
"Where can I get it?"
…
New Zealand.
At a bookstore.
"Manager! I'd like a copy of Gone with the Wind!"
"I want three copies. My friends are asking me to buy it for them."
"Sorry, it's sold out."
"What? Wasn't it just published?"
"Yeah, the stock is limited, so it was already sold out by this morning."
"When are you going to restock it?"
"I'll call to the publishers later. Er, is the book really that good? I've had a lot of people coming in to ask about it these past two days."
"I've not read it either, but a lot of people are recommending it online."
…
The UK.
"Heavens!"
"This is a book that absolutely has a fight with The Pullus Family!"
"The Pullus Family? That's one of the top ten famous works of the world!"
"Just read it and you all will know what I mean. That Chinese writer is absolutely incredible!"
"So this is the book that was written by the world's number one hacker?"
"Yes. Lillian even sung with him during the Olympics."
"Ah, so it's that guy?! I know him!"
"Where'd you get your copy of the book?"
"It's not sold anywhere anymore. It's out of stock."
…
Australia.
"Can anyone get a copy of Gone with the Wind?"
"Why are you asking as well?"
"Everyone's recommending the book like crazy!"
"Yeah, my uni's form teacher and everyone else are recommending I read it too."
"I managed to get a copy of it. I only bought it with the mentality of giving the book a try. But I couldn't have expected that by the end of the third day, I didn't even want to go to work!"
"Is the book really that good?"
"It's a rare work that only appears every 100 years!"
"There's war and the impact that it has on the livelihood of the people. It's so well-written!"
"Agreed, this is fucking the best novel!"
"The only problem is that I can't buy it anymore. It's out of stock everywhere!"
…
At an international publishing house.
One of the partners for the English edition of Gone with the Wind.
Within the office of the publishing house was a flurry of talking on phones.
"What's happening?"
"It's about Gone with the Wind again?"
"They're asking us for a restock again?"
"We've already printed 50,000 copies, but it's been sold out in only four days?"
"It's such a popular book?"
"Chief Editor, what do we do now?"
"What else can we do? Print another run! Increase the supply! Give them however much they're asking for!"
"Then how many copies should we plan for the second print run?"
"—Another 500,000 copies!"
"What? That many? Wouldn't that be too risky?"
"Risky? My ass! I've been reading this book for the past three days! After today, this book will definitely have a place in history among the literature of the world! I guarantee it!"
"Understood!"
"We will step up the publicity as well!"
…
On the first day.
Gone with the Wind was unknown.
The next day.
The word of mouth surrounding Gone with the Wind picked up.
On the third day.
Gone with the Wind had blown up.
In just a few short days.
Its reputation.
Its sales.
The English edition of Gone with the Wind had experienced an explosion in countless English-speaking countries around the world!
There were almost no promotions, with very few advertisements run, and just a small initial print run for the book, so no one really knew about it. But just like that, a novel named Gone with the Wind that was written by a Chinese citizen was suddenly standing out from the rest of its competition and pushed to the forefront! It was as though the global literary field had been taken over by Gone with the Wind! This shocked countless people all around the world!
Additional print run!
Additional print run!
And another additional print run!
500,000 copies!
1 million copies!
2 million copies!
Gone with the Wind was selling like hotcakes!
It was so crazy that everyone was dumbfounded!
Following the CIH incident from years ago, Zhang Ye's name appeared on the international scene for the second time!


Zhang Ye was originally a mundane college graduate with aspiring dreams to become a star, but unfortunately has below average looks and height. However one day, he woke up and suddenly found himself in a parallel world! 
It’s like the same world, but wait a minute…many brands, celebrities and even famous works from his world changed and are gone in this new world! Armed with the profound literary knowledge of his previous world and a heaven-defying Game Ring that gives him magical items, stats and skills, Zhang Ye embarks on a journey to pursue his life-long dream of becoming famous!
Follow Zhang Ye as he takes the new world by storm, one plagiarized piece at a time, to hilarious reactions!

Epilogue
In the monitor room, Dr. Hans is closely watching Sakuya's movement.
"So, how is it going Dr. Hans?"
"Oh, Mr. Rainer. It's all proceeding smoothly. Just like what we have predicted, she takes on the bait."
"Ooh... Splendid... now, we just have to wait for her to come."
"She seemed to make a significant progress every time. That's pleasing for me."
"With this, I'm getting closer to my goal. Hahaha..."
Mr. Rainer then left the room. When he left, he didn't see the expression that is shown by Dr. Hans.
"Hehehe... there are three of them, yet not single one realized my true motives. Hahaha. They're all brilliant yet stupid."
But, he didn't realize someone hears all of that.
From the small gap between the doors, a pair of eyes is taking a peek. That eye is somehow familiar.
"Just like what Mr. Aaron said. He seemed to have something hidden. I don't know what that is, so I can only keep an eye on him for the time being."
The pair of eyes then disappears in the dark hallway leaving a faint echo. 
Now that's left is for me to find out about where they keep Yuki.








Extra Login
I don't know if you guys really read the extra login, but I'm spending a lot of time to write it up. I want to make you guys understand about the system and the plot. But, it seemed like nobody is reading it... and it gets me into a pretty bad mood... So, for this book extra login how about we open some Q & A corner..?
Q: is this going to be an action based novel?
A: hmm... I don't know... I'm bad at writing the battle scene. I also want to put a lot of romance in here. What do I know is it's going to be somewhat psychological?
Q: where do you get the idea to write about the novel?
A: I'm getting a lot of source for this. Sword art online, log horizon, yureka, the moonlight sculptor, and a bunch of MMORPG game.
Q: when are you going to write more about the other character beside from Kuro and Sakuya?
A: I'm planning to write and tell you about some of the character, but for now I'm focusing at Kuro and Sakuya's arc.
Q: how do you know about the brain stuff and so on? Do you do some research?
A: yes, I'm taking a lot of time to search some information online about the fact. Like the impulse speed, the brain limit, and much more. I want to make it realistic. I want to get you guys thinking... whoa... it's really are possible... Hehehe...
Q: did this game is mainly about farming? Player reaches high level from just killing regular monster. Any quest or something like that?
A: this is what most people asked me... worry not. In this book, they've encountered some quest and some back story.
Q: what about the game customizations? A game where I have to use my real face is so lame. Isn't the selling point to play a game is that you could be someone different?
A: this is an old question from when I wrote the first book. I've taken in the comments and made revision.
Q: how can Kuro be so powerful?
A: it's because he's able to push brain to his limit. As for his high level, he struggle for that. He always determined to be a strong person.
Q: what exactly is Sakuya?
A: Sakuya is an AI that is someday going to be an ultimate AI. That's what Rainer thinks though.

Q: who's snow that's talking to Sakuya?
A: probably most of you can guess it already... snow is an English word for yuki...
Q: why is your grammar and spelling mistakes is a lot? Aren't you proof reading it?
A: this is one of the most common questions... I'm sorry about this but English is not my mother tongue language. I also did the editing myself, so... please give me some consideration... I'll do some revision if it's really that bad. In fact the first book 1st revision is finished...
Q: how long is the story going to be?
A: probably it's going to be around 5 to 8 books. I don't want to spend more time on it because it's only a hobby of mine. I have to move on in my life and face the reality.
Q: what is going attract the reader? The story?
A: yes, it's definitely the story. Because some people are really giving me a harsh comments about the game aspect. They call it boring, and so on... I couldn't argue though...
Q: who is Dr. Hans?
A: he's just some weird person. A lunatic if I should tell you. Sometimes he's calm, sometimes he's crazy... I still have some surprise about his story.
Q: how fast can you write?
A: I write about 10.000 words a day maximum... taking it into consideration one book should be finished in four to five days, but it's impossible... Hahaha...
Q: what RPG game do you play?
A: I played RO, Dota, RF, FLYFF, Dragonica, and a lot more.
Q: who's your favorite's character?
A: Kuro... I'm just a weakling like him... he resembles me a lot... he's someone that I would like to be... I want to be strong like him...
Q: who's Sakuya if you have to compare it to an actress?
A: I haven't even thought about it... I'm always think of her as a yamato nadeshiko... a princess... so, if you could find an Asian girl with a long hair, white skin, and pretty... that's her... Hahaha...
Q: you said that English is not your mother tongue language. So, where do you come from? What language do you use? What's your nationality?
A: I came from Indonesia... I use Indonesian language... my nationality is Indonesian.
Q: why is the story so short for a novel?
A: I was trying to write a light novel, but I don't think I'm doing it right... because of that, I'm just ending each book whenever I fell I have write enough.. Hahaha...
Q: what's your favorite anime?
A: I really like to watched a lot...but if I have to say, the one with a romance in it and less ecchi... for instance, sakurasou no pet no kanojo... hyouka... the highschool boys life something... angel beats... guilty crown.. lelouch the rebellion.. And much more...
Q: what kind of manga do you read?
A: I read all kinds of manga... I usually spent more than 8 hours a day to read manga.
Q: why are you using Japan as the setting?
A: hmm... because I like it... I love their culture... I hope that someday I'll be able to visit the country...
Q: based on the personality, who's the easiest to write about?
A: Hikaru... he's the second main character in this story... he has a bright personality, straight forward... and have a lot of place to grow...
Q: what kind of girl is your dream girl? You write a lot about pretty girl in the book, so which one do you prefer? Sakuya or someone else?
A: as for description only, I like Sakuya the best. Long hair, red eyes, white skin, further more she's wearing a shrine maiden clothes...but for the personality, I like Leona the best... a little bit tsundere... Hahaha...
Q: do you have target that you want to achieve by writing this novel?
A: I don't have anything in particular... it would be great if it could get an anime, manga, and figurines, but most of the time I'm just writing it as a hobby. You could say that it's one of my aspirations.
Q: when you think about the game system, what do you have in your mind?
A: I want it to be a game with medieval setting, like ragnarok... that's one of my favorites game. I'm thinking a lot about the PK system too... sometimes you just want to chop another player head don't you? To make the law, I created the prison... I don't want to have some weird scene in the novel about "H" stuff... although that one scene from Lime is pretty bad... other than that, I want it to be a game with a fun hunting system. But people who read it don't think so...


Q: if you get to play the game in the real life, what class are you going to choose?
A: there's a lot of class that I want to try... I can't decided it... but if I really have to choose one, I'll be a wizard... one of favourite character, se7en is making its debut in the story..
Q: if someone creates the Syder and the game, would you like to play?
A: no... I don't want to... I'll wait until a new version is out... I don't know if it's going to be safe.
Q: how many hours you spend every day to write?
A: it's about three to four hours in total.
Q: what's your hope for the future?
A: I hope I can finish the whole story as fast as I can... Hahaha
Q: do you have any words for your reader?
A: dear reader... I'm sorry for my poor English proficiency... I'm just hoping that you will enjoy my story... please tell your friends about it okay? Hahaha... and thank you for all of your comments... it really helped me a lot... as for the question I've answered some of it in here... see you guys on the next volume...

If you like the story, check my ongoing one: 
The World OF Skill

The story is 5-6 years old and it was written when I first start writing, there will be some mistakes here and there but it might show you an idea on how much I've improved XD~
The story is completed since it was a short 100k words novel~ and it was done in a week~ yeay!

Don’t you think that life in this world is a little bit boring? People talks to someone they know every day, pretending that they are friends. In reality they are doing such things just for their own convenience. Tell to each other that they are friends.  Just for a sole reason, so they can take advantage from the other party.
 
I realized these things since I entered high school. It is true that I was an introvert. I was not an outgoing person, but I can survive in the community. I prefer reading book and playing games, rather than exercising or doing outdoor sports. I didn’t talk much, only when I needed to. But maybe that’s why they decided to pick on me.

One day I was bullied by my upperclassmen. My best friend was at the scene. I called out to him, asking for help. But he just passes by like I was some stranger that he met at the road. The next day at school he said that he was sorry, because there is nothing that he can do. 

We have been spending times together since middle school. Hanging out together, doing homework, cheat our way out trough exams, and playing games together. We are close. Or so I thought. So this is how the community works. 

People in this world, they are reeks of evil. They only care about their self. Money and power is what they seek. They are a hypocrite if they said they are doing charity because of love. They are doing it so people will have better opinion about them. This world has rotten too much. I don’t have the power to change this world. I never even dream about changing this world.

So what should I do? I don’t have any other place to go. I wander around aimlessly until I stop by a large screen TV in front of a shopping mall.

 “Behold the new era of gaming. With Syder (synapse reader) implemented on the system, Rebirth Online will be the first VRMMORPG (Virtual Reality Massively Multiplayer Online Role Playing Game) in the world. The pre-order sales have gone through 500,000 units and will be shipped all around the world tomorrow, along with the first launch of the server. People who don’t apply for the pre-order can buy them tomorrow at FFAID Corporation building in Akihabara at 7:00am. Luckily, we have Dr. Hans Schneider here with us; please let us welcome the person that invented the Syder, as our guest for the interview tonight.” Said the beautiful newswoman on the TV enthusiastically.

“Dr. Hans, tell me about the Syder. Isn’t it just recently invented and haven’t been properly accepted by various medical organization around the world? Even the rumor says that it possess a threat to the brain.” the newswoman asking with full of curiosity.

“The WHO (World Health Organization) already acknowledges it as a safe and usable product. Otherwise we may not be able to sell it. The Syder itself doesn’t do anything to the brain so it couldn’t damage it. As the name implies, Syder is a synapse reader. Our five senses, touch, sight, hearing, taste, smell even our sense to temperature, pain, balance, time, and kinesthetic is controlled by the brain. This starts when a neuron receives an impulse and they transmitted it to the brain. They transmitted it in a form of electricity trough a connective tissue named synapse which connects one neuron to the other neuron. When this electricity processed in the brain, we often read it as a brain wave. So Syder makes it possible for us to read and send images to the brain of the virtual world. ” explain Dr. Hans who seemed can’t stop talking.

This is it. This is the answer to my entire question. I just have to run away to another world. I just have to run away to that world.

Qing Feng was a boy that open his eyes for the first time at the year 2000, he
Was born in a middle class family that can be considered rich in the village but that just in the village a father a mother and a big brother that was five year older than him also there was other members of the family as well 

At the age of 3 he first time he enter the school , time passed at the first year
he go through various test at school and he became first at the end of the year and he also made many friends as well 

Soon years passes as he and his friends grow up together always played together, but like any other humans he had some deference as well for first ,,,
he was a little fat even his friends some time call him fat as well. secend; is that he fear girls at first it wasn't that bad but slowly as time pasa  it turns worse. at first when he was eight he could somehow touch hand of his friends that were girls but at the age of 10 it turned impossible to touch a girl.

Time passed as he and his friends turn fourteen that's when he bought the smartphone that changed his way of life .
It was then he watched his first anime it was not like the animes he watched in tv it was completely different, to him it was as if he found something that he always carved for like he found completely new world that he can live on and always dream about.

From then on he completely drowned in the new world he found but that doesn't means he forgot to go to his school,his scores were as good  as always it's just, at that time a new student transfer to his school from a different place and soon they become friends and he learned that he also use to come first in his school that's the reason that qing feng came 2'nd at the end of the year exam. 

But he was not sad,, on the other hand ha was happy for his friend and also he had his own world of anime as well so he didn't mind about the exam scores, his other friends ware good at academic but not at the his level 

But at the next year change everything, it was at the start of the year when he almost finished watching every good anime that were available online for free of changes, he was sad that all the anime were finish but that didn't last long thow  next qing feng found out about novel. 

Qing Feng  didn't wast a single moment  after learning about fantasy  novel and immediately searched for it and found that there are hundreds of novels to be read that mean hundreds of New world. 

Day's passed and qing feng keep reading and reading but his exam scores didn't lowered a single bit, slowly the days that he goes to school decrease and at the end he became a shut in, other than the time for his own need qing feng Stop coming out of his room, more then a year passed like that.

Now it was the time of governments board exem of them . he also took part in  the exem,

The exam lasted for about two weeks and he and his friends finished the exem and now it was the time for two months holiday before the scouts are out, so it was his best time to read novel and manga. 

Qing Feng was a shut in, but he never wasted his time, the time he was in his room he also became interest in learning different language's so he learned Chinese , english, for reading novel and manga that he found online. .
At home his mother, father and brother tried to make him go out of his room but failed, now speaking of brother he always for some reason hate him so qing feng also hate him there where time they fought but to qing feng the brother is also family and like that days pass ..

Soon the holidays were over and it was the time for the scores of the board exem to be announced, it was also the time that qing feng   and friends turned sixteen years old as  well.

Qing Feng and his friends were on there way to school there were some little kids as well that were returning to there homes .qing feng and some of his friends  home's were on the  different side of the school so they were about to cross the road when five kids started to run to cross the road  four kids allready crossed the road and a little girl was still crossing and at that time came the enemy of all the otaku and shut in's it was all and everyone's respected and one an only truck-kun that was about to crush the little girl,,           
To,, qing feng time seemed to slow down his somehow fat body moved on it's own jumping straight he throw the little girl to the arms of his friend on the different side of the road and then with a....
"bang" came pain an unbelievable amount of pain, after that all that was left there was darkness an infinite amount of darkness ...

This is a story about Qing Feng who reincarnated as Qing Shui and from the love he received from Qing Yi he totally accepted himself as Qing Shui.

(I am just writing for fun so sorry  if there are any problem)

Wednesday, several weeks later
Ever since they had employed the nannies, Hou Yi rarely allowed Jang to sleep in their room.  As he kept reminding Anna, they paid the nannies to be there to care for Jang and letting the two of them have time to themselves was important.  While Anna always wanted to argue with him that it was important, they were there for Jang, every time he reminded Anna that in leaving him with the nannies gave them time with each other she would blush.
However, last night he relented and gave into Anna's demands.  She quietly said that she wanted the two most important men in her life with her in the morning when he awoke and told Hou Yi he would receive his reward that night for letting her have her way.  It was only after a brief pause that it clicked with Hou Yi that it was the anniversary of them obtaining their marriage certificate. 
A significantly important date, and almost missing it due to being busy at work was sending him into a spin.  How could he have almost forgotten the day that marked the happiness that he had.  Married to the love of his life, and having such a beautiful child.  While thinking about Jang, it was still touched with some sadness of having lost Aaron so young.  Like Anna, despite him having his name, they always called him by his English name, Aaron, due to its meaning.
As he sat watching his sleeping wife, Hou Yi last night had felt guilty in calling Assistant Wang to book a restaurant for tonight, and to arrange for flowers to be sent to Anna throughout the day.  He knew at some stage he would need to leave work and visit Fengs to pick up the Eternity Ring Assistant Wang was emailing them about last night.
Turning away from Anna, he could see Jang just starting to stir in his cot.  He was still surprised that he was sleeping through most of the night.  As he moved over to pick him up, he could still not believe that this little person was their child, and despite everything he had been through, he was not overly demanding.  According to the nannies, he was a pleasure to care for.
After changing Jang's nappy, he carefully headed back to their bed to wake Anna up.  Just thinking about things made him feel sentimental.  Carefully sitting down, he leant over and gave Anna a kiss to wake her, and allowed Jang, who was now wide awake to pat his mother's cheek.   As she started to move, he carefully moved back slightly, and saw that she awoke with a smile on her face, as she drowsily said "What a wonderful way to wake up, with the two most important men in my life at this time with me."
Smiling at that, Hou Yi said "Happy Anniversary darling."
"Happy Anniversary, Yi.  Now are you…"
"Do you need to ask.  I will spoil you later, but we need a little family time before real life intervenes.  All I ask is that you be ready for a night out tonight, without Jang.  Just let the nannies know we will be at the apartment rather than returning here."
"You know I want to be here in case something happens with him."
Hou Yi smiled and quietly said "How do you expect me to spoil you, if we are worried about Jang and not willing to let the nannies do their job?  And we are only a call away if there is any issue."
Pausing Anna, "You better spoil me, or …"
"Threat's Anna.  You know they do not work."
"But…"
"No Buts.  I gave in to you when you were pregnant as of everything else, but do you think you can manipulate me all the time…"
"If you want to have your fun…" laughed Anna.
Shaking his head Hou Yi said "I do not know what to do with you sometimes…"
"You just have to love me."
"That is a given, and it better be a two-way street."
"It is.  What happened twelve months ago was meant to be.  Who would have thought, despite Aaron's death we would have all the happiness that we have, and we have a lifetime to look forward to." With that Anna leant over and gave Hou Yi a quick kiss before taking Jang from him and settling into his arms.  When she was comfortable, she quietly said "This is perfect."
Kissing Anna briefly on the head Hou Yi said "It is."
Before either of them could say another word, Jang started crying and looking for Anna's b*east.  Laughing Hou Yi said, "Our son knows how to spoil the moment for his parents."
Giggling, Anna said "He does seem to have that timing, but I better feed him." Resting in Hou Yi's arms, Anna quickly opened her pyjama top and Jang immediately fastened himself onto Anna's b*east and started feeding.  Neither of them was willing to speak, and just looked down at him while he had his fill.
As Anna tidied herself up, Hou Yi took Jang, and changed him again, before calling the nannies for them to collect Jang, and get him ready from the day.  While he loved having Jang with them, he did want to spend a few minutes alone with Anna before heading into the office.
As Jang left with the nanny, Hou Yi headed into the en-suite where Anna had drifted.  On entering he realised Anna had no idea that he was there, and he quickly undressed before moving into the shower and carefully pulling Anna into his arms, before moving his hands to carefully start to caress her b*easts.
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Anna Jones, an Australian travelled with her fiancé Lu Jinhu to marry in his home country, only to find out that she has been duped by him and robbed of everything that she owns.  A quirk of fate allows her to marry CEO Hou Yi, who was meant to on the same day marry his finance Yang Lin, who in fact married Lu Jinhu.  Marriage for Anna, started as a plan to gain some measure of revenge on Lu Jinhu, and for Hou Yi to prevent Lu Jinhu from obtaining the family company however fate had something different in store for them.  Not only did they achieve their initially goals, but their relationship turned into something else, that could last a lifetime despite the cultural differences and the trouble Lu Jinhu and Yang Lin caused them.

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