Item: BEING RE-WRITTEN!!
Rating: 5

Heavenmonarch_Author1yr

2023-10-14 20:50

Being honest, I probably just wrote this because I was bored, but for all it’s worth, I guarantee that this is one of the best football (or soccer, whatever you’re used to) fictions that you’ll ever see. This book is very different when compared to most of the other books that I’ve written, being that everything doesn’t happen in some sort of fantasy world or something. There will be romance really early on in the book, for those of you that would like that although there will be NO form of harem. If there’s more then I’ll provide an update. Happy reading!

BEING RE-WRITTEN!!

Heavenmonarch_

4.4

1 Chs

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David_AdetolaLv4

Love the book hope it become frequent

1yr

Heavenmonarch_Author

Thank you!

David_Adetola:Love the book hope it become frequent

1yr

Spring_Bloom_3709Lv2

bro not harem but can he also have some relationships with some celebs you know playboy vibe pleassseeee😍 romance gets boring fast

1yr

Heavenmonarch_Author

Definitely, hehe

Spring_Bloom_3709:bro not harem but can he also have some relationships with some celebs you know playboy vibe pleassseeee😍 romance gets boring fast

1yr

Haku_OuroborosLv4

mtl?

1yr

Heavenmonarch_Author

No. It’s an original work

Haku_Ouroboros:mtl?

1yr

TheGreatest1Lv4

Does he join Man United?

Heavenmonarch_:No. It’s an original work

12mth

Heavenmonarch_Author

I don't know...🤷

TheGreatest1:Does he join Man United?

12mth

Kabuk5Lv14

Why is his name so weird

11mth

RyuSenjuLv13

what chapter does the romance start

Heavenmonarch_:Definitely, hehe

11mth

Heavenmonarch_Author

Late fifties to early sixties

RyuSenju:what chapter does the romance start

11mth

RyuSenjuLv13

nice to know

Heavenmonarch_:Late fifties to early sixties

11mth

MarinXGrayfiaLv4

I seen better

9mth

Bouncy_BeastLv4

is this abandoned have to know before getting my hopes up cause this looks promising

8mth

Bouncy_BeastLv4

if so, mention them.

MarinXGrayfia:I seen better

8mth

Heavenmonarch_Author

Not abandoned. Currently writing college exams, hence the temporary hiatus

Bouncy_Beast:is this abandoned have to know before getting my hopes up cause this looks promising

8mth

Haku_OuroborosLv4

When does professional football start? (Google translate)

Heavenmonarch_:Not abandoned. Currently writing college exams, hence the temporary hiatus

8mth

Heavenmonarch_Author

How do you mean?

Haku_Ouroboros:When does professional football start? (Google translate)

8mth

Haku_OuroborosLv4

premier league , sería a , Bundesliga , la liga

Heavenmonarch_:How do you mean?

8mth

Heavenmonarch_Author

When he's going to start playing there? I can't say for sure but maybe mid to late hundreds

Haku_Ouroboros:premier league , sería a , Bundesliga , la liga

8mth

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