Item: BEING RE-WRITTEN!!
Rating: 2.8
Author: QuaziY

QuaziYLv411mth

2024-01-06 15:47

What is the story about? video game character in FIFA/PES? if he gets any skill it should assimilate with his body and brain. improve his stats and game intelligence. it should be like he practiced it for a long time. in this story he uses skills like he's using a controller to play. and he acts like he's playing street football. and author says that it's one of the best football novel there! I think author's research is based on virtual game like FIFA/PES.

BEING RE-WRITTEN!!

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Heavenmonarch_Author

Being honest, I probably just wrote this because I was bored, but for all it’s worth, I guarantee that this is one of the best football (or soccer, whatever you’re used to) fictions that you’ll ever see. This book is very different when compared to most of the other books that I’ve written, being that everything doesn’t happen in some sort of fantasy world or something. There will be romance really early on in the book, for those of you that would like that although there will be NO form of harem. If there’s more then I’ll provide an update. Happy reading!

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at the start, I really liked this story, but after a lackluster story development and a shoddy update, stability I might drop this story.

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EliteMaskyLv4

Great start for the book, waiting for more chapters to be released.

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MrHaogoLv4

This is something you know is just destined for greatness! Good luck bro

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LGK_maoreLv4

good job author keep going ...i like the description so take 5stars 🤭🤭🤭

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LonsLv4

love how you wrote this can't wait dor more chapter's😁⚡

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Just based on fact that the author refers to it as Football rather than Soccer if enough of a sell. The most memorable sports stories basically have powers in them and they always manage to blow my expectations out of the water. The system in this work is no exception.

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I really like the your artistic approach for system usage and I want to assure you that this work that you just start writing in boredom will carve your career in a positive sense

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