Enigma21
A new and aspiring Author. Please do check out my books.
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I have mentioned this in the review but I will say it again, I hope you don't get a grudge from the review. I never suggested that you originally had a grudge against me I have merely pointed out my opinion of your novel and nothing else. After all, that is what reviews are. If you call people "npc's" in real life then I believe you have a real problem sir. Anyways, I wish you luck in your endeavors. No harm done.
I'm going to be completely honest, this is a rinse and repeat plot used a million times throughout the enjoy. Perhaps other people can enjoy it but at this point, I am quite sick of it. In the future I hope to see an original take from you, maybe not something cliché. In terms of writing quality, its quite good. A few hiccups here and there but it won't be noticed by a regular reader. Enjoyed the writing, didn't stay for the plot. I hope you will use this review as an aspect of improvement rather than hold a grudge against me. I wish you good luck in your endeavors.
Very long chapters, perhaps too excessive? At the moment, writing quality and grammar are fully fledged out but some sentences can be too long or hard to read as you try to fit too much descriptive language. The story is hooking enough for me to read the novel but not enough for me to read 5k words. This is your writing style and I'm not complaining, maybe I'm not used to long chapters. I hope you don't take my review too harshly as I am just letting out what I feel. I'm excited to see more of the Chronicles of Carthol.
Everyone's suggestions are really helpful not matter. Don't be afraid to call things out even if people don't agree. Thank you very much for being so kind to review.