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Fractured Through Time

作者: Enigma21
Fantasy
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WebNovel で公開されている、Enigma21 の作者が書いた Fractured Through Time の小説を読んでください。In desperate need of money, Riven signs a deal. Riven is cast upon a foreboding land's shores and loses himself within the vast jungle. He isn't prepared to find a secret that will change his life, hi...

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In desperate need of money, Riven signs a deal. Riven is cast upon a foreboding land's shores and loses himself within the vast jungle. He isn't prepared to find a secret that will change his life, his timeline, forever.

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I have a harem of tall girls, they are demons, they don't know I am hu

Irumi Aike a short boy of 14 years of age, was very obedient and tender, his parents took advantage of his obedience and sent him to work at the age of 10. Due to his four years of work, he developed the perfect ability to dodge. Thanks to his tender appearance and skinny body, he was picked on, but it never bothered him, he just wanted to survive another day. Now we go back to 14-year-old Irumi who was working on a tuna transport ship and the weather was not good that day. Irumi takes care of that tuna, so it doesn't fall off, or I'll take 50 percent of your salary off. Suddenly the tuna he was holding fell down, and after that other tuna were falling on top of Irumi, but thanks to his perfect dodging skills he didn't get hurt. But something strange happened another tuna that was about to fall on top of him stopped in the air and after that, he teleported and was in the air. Where am I, and why am I floating? Irumi was looking around when he decided to look in front of him and saw an old man with two horns and a tail that looked like he was talking, but he didn't understand him until he snapped his fingers. Now you can understand the demonic language and if you wonder why you are here it is because your parents sold your soul they would never do that, would they? Yes, definitely, thought Irumi to herself. His parents were never there for him, they had left him in the countryside with only a few things to survive on, and they only came to steal his precious money. What is this man going to do to me? Well, I'm going to take you to the underworld since your parents sold me, your soul no longer belongs here Irumi. I was going to change it to fanfic because I'm going to copy it directly, but I wanted to change it from a novel to fanfic, so I leave it there if you already realize this story is super inspired by Iruma kun see it is super entertaining this is my first story so forgive the mistakes the main character will look the same as on the cover and the girl on the cover will also be in the harem probably the harem will be only 3 or 4, and sorry for writing a chapter in the synopsis haha.

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Ethereal Resurgence: Rebirth of the Fractured Heart

She had been a celebrated technologist, her creations hailed as the future. Every circuit, every line of code, was an ode to her passion for progress. The city hailed her as a prodigy, and the world looked to her for hope.Yet, dreams have a tendency to unravel. The same city that praised her became the canvas of her disillusionment. Her innovative marvels were not the architects of a better world, but tools for those who sought control. The powerful elite had exploited her ingenuity, bending it to their will and corrupting her visions. .... .... .... In a dazzling metropolis where the pulse of technology dictates society, and its underbelly harbors the grit of rebellion, resides Elara—a prodigious technologist turned relentless underground engineer. Elara's brilliance was eclipsed by a haunting past—a past that forged her into a resilient force challenging the very fabric of a dystopian society.Once an icon of innovation, Elara bore witness to her creations being ruthlessly exploited, leaving her dreams shattered and her heart scarred. Now, amidst the shadows of the city's underbelly, she wages a silent war against the callous elite and their tyrannical regime.Elara's fate takes a serendipitous turn when she collides with Aiden, an enigmatic young man from the city's privileged echelons. Drawn to Elara's fiery determination and sharp intellect, Aiden finds himself captivated by her independent spirit, defying the rigid boundaries set by their divided world.Their convergence sets off a chain of events that binds their hearts and fuels their determination to challenge the oppressive status quo. United in their passion for justice, they unveil a clandestine movement—a beacon of hope for those oppressed and shackled by a technological dictatorship.As the battle for a new dawn intensifies, secrets unravel, and hidden truths surface, testing their union. Elara's technological prowess becomes the linchpin in their revolt, the very tool they need to dismantle the deep-rooted tyranny.In the midst of breathtaking technological wonders and shrouded conspiracies, Elara's indomitable spirit and Aiden's unwavering resolve form an alliance that could rewrite the destiny of their world. Yet, in their pursuit of justice, they must confront heart-wrenching trials and make sacrifices that threaten to tear their love apart."Ethereal Resurgence: Rebirth of the Fractured Heart" is an electrifying tale of love, sacrifice, and the resilience of the human spirit in the face of unparalleled adversity. Elara's transformation from a victim of her past to a beacon of strength showcases the extraordinary capacity of love and determination to rewrite the future.

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Froggymine
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Maybe I'm biased towards such texts but this novel is great. The plot is exciting and it has a wide room for extending itself. It seems to have consitantly good writing and I don't think it will disapoint anyone! 11/10

Author_Bright
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The story is very catching and captivating. Nice plot I most say. The description is amazing. The synopsis also is very attractive. Can't wait to indulge in this novel.

Eclipse_Ranger
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Its really really interesting story if you loved any of the journey movies (journey to the center of the earth or journey to the mysterious island) you will love this it has on of craziest world buildings you can see even from the very first chapter out there love you author for writing such a fabulous piece of art

1stDaoistOfReading
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I feel as though the writing quality could be improved as the author's descriptive ability is currently lacking but it's not actually bad enough for u to repulse it its actually quite doable basically a cake with all the ingredients but missing the icing that makes it look better and more attractive. The book all in all albeit 1 chapter isn't too bad and I can say that its a good first try for the author

Enigma21
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Good Novel! Love the premise. Good grammar and world building. Hope to see more chapters soon. I wish you good luck in WSA. This has a lot a potential.

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JESSAZEAL
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it got a nice idea bro you tell the story and details nice .. however it would be very nice if continue the chapter a bit and add something that triggered more of there curiousity. hope you guys continue doing good work.

Nancy_Micheal_4985
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the book is exciting to read, and the plot and characters are outstanding I must say your book is amazing and you have quality grammar, an excellent author I can't wait for the next chapter

MrBigMan
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WOW! I love this book so much it is very great and awesome. This book is truly deserving of 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CharlieJames
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Wowey! Someone call an ambulance because I have no breath left! Just jokes. This debut chapter is one of, if not the best chapter I have read on this website. It includes many elements such as the beginnings of great character structure as well as building this fantastic world. I feel like I relate dearly to the main character and even made be shed a tear once or twice. I do have a few things I would like to suggest to a new author such as this brilliant one. I believe the characters should be balanced between genders and race so that it reaches and relates to the vaster majority of people. Then we can go main stream baby! I also LOVE the early mentions of the main character’s north-eastern roots and how he used to kick the sand out of boredom out the front of his bedroom window. I also use to do this but instead of sand, it was my hamster. Another point I would like to bring up during this opportunity to contact such an epic author is that your choice of title is perfect for such a tone and storyline. Even though we have not yet been emerged into the world of time in the story, I feel that I have been deeply impacted as time travels super fast while reading this book because of how emerged I get when reading it. I know for a fact that other readers feel the same way. For me, I have spent 4 hours so far reading over this 1st chapter and drawing what I believe the characters and world looks like. I have also ordered a custom bed spread from Etsy with my drawing on it. 5 stars any day.

Ethan_Arthur
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Very fun read! can't wait for more. The characters were very interesting and I cant wait to see how they will develop over the chapters. [img=recommend]

Liam_Crout
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Good novel. interesting start. It has a lot of potential. Perhaps because there is only one chapter, I can't give you a fully review but from what I have read, it is excellent so far. I hope hope you continue.

NB00000
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Great story so far. Excellent storytelling. I was hooked from the first paragraph. I liked the suspense and mystery. The author did an amazing job of giving vivid descriptions. I've already added the book to my library and looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

Fictor
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Superb storytelling,the setting is refined,the detail is refined and the intense of each stanza is like a fresh patch of dopamine thats keeps the reader in high suspense.There is a tiny bit of grammatically but those can be reworked easily.Overrall a good hook and a good writing continue to pursue greater heights with my full support!

Esakome_Mariam
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A very good and interesting story line [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Spiros_Skliris
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The book is wonderful, I love the story line, I love the idea of everything, The book looks promising, the settings are okay, Keep it up, cant wait for your updates.

Homeless_Traveler
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the premise is interesting, the world-building is done greatly, and the elaborated explanation is perfect. this novel seems very promising. So far there's nothing to nitpick

Arklainne
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For now, the World background is clear, though it was hard for me to visualize it clearly, you should add more details and make it extravagant so we can clearly imagine it.

yasuramaru_sama
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I like story where there is adventure and mystery like this i am really curious about what will happen in the future. Keep writing like this you have my full support

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