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I feel as though the writing quality could be improved as the author's descriptive ability is currently lacking but it's not actually bad enough for u to repulse it its actually quite doable basically a cake with all the ingredients but missing the icing that makes it look better and more attractive. The book all in all albeit 1 chapter isn't too bad and I can say that its a good first try for the author

Fractured Through Time

Enigma21

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Thankyou for the review. I try to keep things simple but still create a solid image in the reader without overdoing things and making it complicated. I hope we satisfy you in future chapters.[img=update]