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Padfayeper

Padfayeper

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contact me here: padfayeper@gmail.com May God bless you ❤️

2020-10-16 入りましたPhilippines
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
    に返信 Dream_blue98

    yeah, I would answer the same if I was asked with that question by a Kim Hyung Tae (Kim Taehyung) lol HAHAAHAHAHHA Anyways, thank your for consistently liking my story. It really inspires me to continue the story <3

    "Uhh, yeah sure." (y/n) answered.
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    The Luckiest Girl On Earth
    若者 · Padfayeper
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
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    I haven't finished the story yet but I can say that the story was well written. It has an amazing plot and the story develops just fine. I like how the author narrates the story for not all his/her words are common. The only thing that needs editing is the description. The story's description is not that thrilling (for me). I advice you add some questions that may awaken the readers' curiosity. But overall, the story's good.

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    Birth of The Free Bird
    ファンタジー · MortalLearner
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
    に返信 Decree_Woods

    Thank you!!

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    The Luckiest Girl On Earth
    若者 · Padfayeper
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
    に返信 Aliyah_Jasmine

    Thank you!!

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    The Luckiest Girl On Earth
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
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    I haven't finish the story yet as I am slow in reading xD But now, I understand why this story has 4.8 ratings. It has a good plot and a good world background, The story's good it made me add it to my library xD

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    The Bride of The Second Prince (English)
    ファンタジー · Aliyah_Jasmine
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
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    The story plot is good because the author has a wide imagination. He/she gave justice to the world background by creating his/her own. I also like how the story developes. I understand that there are some grammatical and tyographical errors as the author's new to this and the chapters are not yet edited. But overall, the story's good.

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    Unaccountable Role
    ファンタジー · Decree_Woods
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
    に返信 Dream_blue98

    lolz same xD

    "I forgive you… I-I know you'll all think I intended this because I am your fan. But I swear, I didn't plan all of this. Yes, I'm a big enthusiast of you guys, but I couldn't afford to kidnap you. I couldn't do something illegal and I couldn't do something that will make you mad at me." (y/n) said, and JN translated all those words into Korean for Tae.
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    The Luckiest Girl On Earth
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
    に返信 MortalLearner

    Thank you!!

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    The Luckiest Girl On Earth
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
    に返信 MoonstarSolar

    Thank you!! <3

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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
    に返信 Padfayeper

    Corrections: Mala ILYS1892 vibes* First and second chapter*

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    1889
    SF · MoonstarSolar
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
    発表

    Since this is a Tagalog language story, I will write a review in Tagalog xD Ang ganda po nung plot mala-1892 vibes pero may kaniya't kaniyang uniqueness. Yung first chapter and second quarter palang po nababasa ko pero grabe asawa ko na kagad si Sebastian AHAHHAHA. Nakakakilig, deserve na deserve po talaga ni Miss Author na ma-digitally publish ang story na ito. Ang lawak po kasi nung imagination nya and alam nya po kung papaano magpakilig at iyak. Matic add ko na 'to sa library ko heheehehe. Overall, ang ganda nung story! I love it, Author!!

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    1889
    SF · MoonstarSolar
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
    に返信 asdgvcxz

    Thank you!!

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    The Luckiest Girl On Earth
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
    発表

    The author has good writing skills. There are less grammatical errors and he/she has a wide imagination. The description as well is good, putting questions in it that might awaken the readers' curiosity is brilliant. I also got hooked xD Overall, the story's good. An applause for the author!

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    If My Heart Could Grow Wings
    ファンタジー · asdgvcxz
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
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    Now I found the antagonist of the story. Now, I know who to hate in this story xD

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    Annabelle Ashborn
    ファンタジー · Dream_blue98
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
    に返信 Dream_blue98

    I don't want to spoil it but maybe Jimin will be in one of the future chapters xD

    As they walk, Tae realized that they were huge people. He wondered what Park Min Ji (His fellow singer in their group) would look like when put beside these guys.
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    The Luckiest Girl On Earth
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
    に返信 Dream_blue98

    Thank you!!

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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
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    The story is really nice. The Author's imagination is so wide. I like the characters also. The third person point of view narration suits the story's genre. The author's narration as well is good. The only thing that needs editing is the description of the story. It's kind of too long some readers might not read it. The description must be at least 100 plus words (I got this advice from one of WebNovel's editors) but don't take away the questions because those are the ones who'll awaken the readers' curiousness. But overall, the story's nice. I like it. Keep up the good work, Author!

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    Annabelle Ashborn
    ファンタジー · Dream_blue98
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
    に返信 Ritankar_Sarkar_

    Thank you!!

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    The Luckiest Girl On Earth
    若者 · Padfayeper
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
    発表

    The story is good, I like how the character narrates the story. The story is good, it just needs editing. Just a little advice: if you're going to use first person point of view, the story must be in present tense but if you're going to use third person point of view, the story must be in past tense. Also, the spacing and the capitalization of some words needs some editing. Lastly, the grammar needs a little editing (you can use Grammarly). Overall, the story has a good plot and the narration is good. I like it. Keep updating, Author!

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    Lost in the 1st Millenium AD
    ファンタジー · Ritankar_Sarkar_
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  • Padfayeper
    Padfayeper3yr
    に返信 Faelyon

    Thank you!!

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    The Luckiest Girl On Earth
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