The characters were well described. I like how the author wrote even the tiniest details like their clothes. Character development's kind of fast though. I like the idea of the author when she included Namjoon's (Joon Nam in the story) intelligent brain. World building is kind of hard to write and hard to make the readers' imagination more vivid and realistic, but she gave justice to world building by explaining and describing the parts and furnitures in the house. All in all, the story was great and I'd love to read more chapters from the author. Keep up the good work and stay safe! ð -Kiths
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