Review Detail of Padfayeper in Annabelle Ashborn

The story is really nice. The Author's imagination is so wide. I like the characters also. The third person point of view narration suits the story's genre. The author's narration as well is good. The only thing that needs editing is the description of the story. It's kind of too long some readers might not read it. The description must be at least 100 plus words (I got this advice from one of WebNovel's editors) but don't take away the questions because those are the ones who'll awaken the readers' curiousness. But overall, the story's nice. I like it. Keep up the good work, Author!