Review Detail of Faelyon in The Luckiest Girl On Earth

The plot itself is pretty interesting and keeps you guessing because of the POV of the story. The writing quality is up and down. There's a little too much repetition in description and speaking. The story develops a bit slow for my taste, but that is probably different for everyone. The characters weren't very deep in terms of roundness and explanation, but I guess this is an exception due to using existing people. The setting was not the best and I feel that the author could have appealed more to both the imagination and senses. Overall I like where the story is going but I think there is always work to be done!