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But will Harley be there?
That was a very quick ending, but still, thank you. It was a good ending, and an excellent translation. And even though I know you're not responsible, I still want to ask, what about the harem? Because before the final fight, everything was shaping up to be either a fight between the women surrounding him or Hebihime giving up and accepting her sisters because she couldn't do it alone.
Totally AI, no plot, no development, it's the same in every chapter, it doesn't have a central idea, and the only thing from the Originals are the names, because absolutely nothing happens from the show, the miracle baby, Hope, doesn't even appear, I really thought it would be good, but it's disappointing, I hope the author lands his idea and fixes this, because I abandon him and I doubt I'm the only one.
I can't believe it, 13 completely empty chapters, no story, no plot, nothing, where is the plot? the canon story? I'm abandoning this fic, and a piece of advice that you didn't ask for, if you use AI at least put your ideas in because this is the same as uploading blank pages.
What is the name of the original?
LISAN AL GAIB!
a bit exaggerated in terms of details, but well, for being the first one you write it came out very well, if you want to write more, go ahead, all my support, if not but you want it to be seen that something happened, just put a mention and that's it, or for those who don't want to read that, put where the scene starts and where it ends so they can skip it
It doesn't hurt me, it burns me, it destroys me!
Leave their names alone for once