Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic

Wednesday is a type of series that that can connect to many Fantasy genera series so I really hope you complete this fic and make this a popular fic.

The MC and OC are just too unlikeable for me to enjoy this. The character interactions so far has been a frustrating read. Shame, the premise seems promising. I also like how the story is going, but the moment the MC's and OC's talk, my interest disappears.

bruh I read the synopsis as 13 year old boy lover and was about to drop this so fast

The story is not just a rehash of the original story Wednesday, but got its' own plot line and backstory. I'd definitely recommend this story because of the interesting OC and origin story. Can't wait for future updates.

The story progresses organically so far. It's a wholesome tale of a lazy introvert protagonist in a world of Wednesday, with some interesting twists. The portrayal of the MC as a lazy introvert is hilarious. I hope the author keeps up the good work! When the story takes a more romantic turn, especially with the introduction of the Wednesday character, I'd love to see some wholesome dramatic tension unfold. A well-written love triangle could add a new layer of comedy situation and excitement.

I think the story is interesting and has a lot of potential.I can't wait for the next chapter.

This is a fantastic story coming from a person who has never watched Wednesday. If I can follow along the story without ever watching, I believe that tells something about the skill of the author.

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Pretty good so far, a god fanfic and a good plot 👌

In what I have been reading the story I have not found anything unpleasant and the power of the MC is well structured and above all it reveals more about the world of Wednesday, the story is highly recommended

I've got to chapter 55 and I lost interest. The plot started nice and the power levels were explained well. However the MC makes stupid decisions from my point of view, though I understand he's only 14 so that made me endure till chapter 55 where I couldn't take it anymore and stopped. Also this is a Wednesday fanfic, but the main character Wednesday I haven't appeared even once... The grammar is good and there are no mistakes that I could find there.

A quite good fanfic👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽. [img=update]

Chapter 9 finds it good till now keep up the Good work! ps: Is Wednesday Addams the love Interest ?

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Truthfully I rather enjoyed the story so far and can't really mention many faults. The power system involving "auras" is a good way to explain many of the powers in the Wednesday series. For all purposes, the main character... acts like a 13 year old edgy teen. Abrasive, impulsive and tunnel visioned... which is pretty normal for that age. A lot of his decision making is also in line with his age, decisions that are "illogical" to most adults is probably what a young teenager who grew up reading manga and stories would probably think is the right thing to do. The original characters for the first 60 chapters all act according to their canon version in the series as far as I am aware, maybe Reems is a bit tooo nice towards him compared to her in the series. Nice cast of OC characters, they're all pretty nice and not hurting the story but no necessarily making it better. They serve their purpose, the exception being Edgar whose interactions with the main character are enjoyable. The grammar is good and sentences aren't hard to read so their isn't any issues when it comes to reading, it could be more fluid but that's not really a huge issue. The main issue is chapter 60 onwards... what was the Miami Trip about? He sleeps with someone he... really doesn't know at all apart from her name and then immediately leaves her because he has to go back to nevermore- fine. His personality basically flips, before he was anti-social, distant even with his girlfriend during the story and quite edgy. Now he seems... not him. He was quite actively trying to talk to Wednesday when he had never made an attempt to talk to anyone else. It was like I was reading a different character in the story I had been reading for sixty chapters. The dialogue between the two was awkward, and not in the deadpan way Enid and Wednesday's at the beginning was but it felt like Trying to smash two completely incompatible people together and forced them to talk it was just wrong. I dislike the recent events, however I don't hate the story because ironically I watched the entire series because of this fanfic so thanks author haha. This is just my review of the fanfic, take it however you want sir but that's my opinion! ^_^

A goood fic👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽 But until now Wednesday didn’t appears

This is very engaging. I hope there's more chapters in the future 👍

Sinceramente tengo solo una queja con el fanfic y es con la gramática pero son muy poquitos los errores que hay y quizás hasta son porque el traductor de Google no traduce bien, por el resto perfecto, sigue así.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Great story. This story has been written quite well, with a good grasp of the original characters personallities while prioritizing an exciting magical power system giving an original theme to the story. The difficulty lies in translating the main characters behavior as an exceptionally strong Psychic to his lackluster environment. The school itself seems pretty underwhelming. The Staff don’t read as necessarily competent nor powerful. However the antagonist are. This is because the structure of organizations seems weak. Maybe if he had taken advantage of his power to become the leader of the nightshade society. It would give him more of a political presence and position him to use Magic artefacts, creatures or other items to his advantage. Also a network. I gave a pretty harsh rating and feedback because the potential is really there and the story has room to further develop. And the original story is holding the fanfiction back. Great story

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