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TEEN WOLF - Born Alpha

作者: Mr_Fruitless
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What is TEEN WOLF - Born Alpha

WebNovel で公開されている、Mr_Fruitless の作者が書いた TEEN WOLF - Born Alpha の小説を読んでください。Protagonist is born into the Teen Wolf series as younger brother to Derek Hale, on a journey of revenge, love, drama and violence, as the Protagonist is a natural born True alpha, trying to not chan...

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Protagonist is born into the Teen Wolf series as younger brother to Derek Hale, on a journey of revenge, love, drama and violence, as the Protagonist is a natural born True alpha, trying to not change the plot to much so he's knowledge of the future does not change as much with his appearance into this world. This is just for fun by the way, English is not my first language so apologies if there are grammatical errors and mispelled words, this fan fiction is just for fun, and it's also my first so please be gentle with your criticism

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Daoist730sPk
Daoist730sPkLv1Daoist730sPk

If you make Parrish appear in the first season it means you've never seen Teenwolf so it makes no sense for you to make a fanfiction about this TV series.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

ForgottenHope
ForgottenHopeLv4ForgottenHope

Was good until his first beta/ harem member started kissing the other girl he liked. Once again i stumble on an open relationship novel then an actual harem. What i find super funny is that he's an "alpha" but am guessing as long as it's not a guy she's kissing he's ok with sharing his betas within his "harem". Total Alpha energy.

HannibalLeecter
HannibalLeecterLv10HannibalLeecter

What's the people's problem? Why everything that puts harem? and some kind of distorted desire that wants in real life......................................................

scott_perry
scott_perryLv4scott_perry

It was a good story until I read chapter 6, why did you have to make Allison and Erica kiss it just ruined it. The story is about a true alpha who is pretty much gets his girls to be with eachother like a cuck like come on seriously.

NbRust
NbRustLv3NbRust

More……. please!!!!!!! Everything going perfect so far, please continue with the chapter lengths

Daoist730sPk
Daoist730sPkLv1Daoist730sPk

Terribleㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

Gd_Sys
Gd_SysLv4Gd_Sys

Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Irebornintheboys
IrebornintheboysLv10Irebornintheboys

for the moment it's not horrible, he doesn't jump on everything that moves, although he wants every pretty woman he sees, it's no worse than any teenager in heat. It remains to be seen when things will start if it will really become a big nonsense I will abandon the story, but for the moment it is reasonable

Soullesswinter
SoullesswinterLv13Soullesswinter

One of the best I hop you keep writing everything about It is really good. And I hope you also have a good day

MrBlackWing
MrBlackWingLv2MrBlackWing

When I started reading, I expected the worst from the comments. But it was worse than I expected. Terrible text organization quality, definitely without any proofreading and the story sometimes doesn't seem to make any sense, as if he just wrote words that connects and that's it. Dude, seriously, pause the writing for a while and do a nice edit. The way it is, I'm impressed that you are in the top 10.

ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4ACHILLES

The author will read feedback and fix his mistakes aa he did recently as he messed up in the story and seemed to delete the chaps to fix his mistakes which is something i haven't seen as people will just wing it and drop the story later on major respect for the author and he seems to read and listen to the critics👍

Keiou_Owlo
Keiou_OwloLv3Keiou_Owlo

The story is very good. Both the character and interactions are perfect. A character who says what he wants, when he wants, but still cares about people. Perfect. The only thing that could be fixed is the writing. It's not that it's bad in terms of grammar, it's more because of the huge paragraphs and lines put together.Sometimes it's hard to follow. But other than that the story is going very well. Congratulations.

Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

Completely pathetic and disappointing, the MC being a true born alpha, doesn't behave as such and is very passive/submissive, tell Yuri if you hate Yuri just like I do, be warned, this kind of thing the author has to inform his readers. DROPED DROPED DROPED DROPED DROPED DROPED DROPED.......

NeaCambelt
NeaCambeltLv1NeaCambelt

Srx du jour au lendemain allisson c fini ? Et le MC part en Oregon c une fic teen wolf lol tu vas faire quoi la bas ? Essaye de créé ton histoire ? Loser

hikigaya4103
hikigaya4103Lv4hikigaya4103

Really Good!!! please don't drop........

Hollowmonk
HollowmonkLv1Hollowmonk

So far your fanfiction is the best it's been and I love the way it's progressing. Please continue on this path and this way of writing, focus more on the character because he is very good.

Nuno_Pinto_5267
Nuno_Pinto_5267Lv4Nuno_Pinto_5267

So far it's been a joy to read. Keep up the good work!!!

ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4ACHILLES

Support for the author was here when the was 3 k views and 0 power stones i believe i started the algorithem but now its blowing up so there will be hate Hope you deal with it well and whats your opnion on the pop off its starting to have?

ACHILLES
ACHILLESLv4ACHILLES

Suprizingly one of the best so far I'll start giving my free powerstones away hope you get more recongnition

WraithTheWolf
WraithTheWolfLv12WraithTheWolf

Solid first chapter hopefully this doesn’t get abandoned as I’m looking forward to this.

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