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ShEsHy

ShEsHy

Lv5

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2017-09-17 入りましたSlovenia
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  • ShEsHy
    ShEsHy1yr
    コメント

    Snowden didn't escape to Russia. He was on his way from Hong Kong to Ecuador, and while he was in Russia waiting for his flight, the US cancelled his passport, leaving him stuck there.

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    Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
    SF · Agent_047
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  • ShEsHy
    ShEsHy2yr
    に返信 Veinydique

    "A Will Eternal" Why? Seriously. The MC in that web novel is just plain autistic. He's basically Steve Urkel (for anyone over 30 ;)), in that he constantly fucks shit up, then wonders why people get pissed at him. It's especially annoying because, out of the hundreds of Xianxia stories I've tried to read, A Will Eternal is the one that comes closest to having an actually good reason for the MC to cultivate in perpetuity (he wants to live forever).

    Dimensional Descent
    ファンタジー · Awespec
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  • ShEsHy
    ShEsHy2yr
    に返信 Zynze5151

    Not all of them. It's only when there are a bunch of characters with names that only differ by a single letter or syllable.

    My Wife Turns Out to Be a Vampire?
    ファンタジー · Feng He Jin Qi Le
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  • ShEsHy
    ShEsHy3yr
    に返信 Dyrem

    Saying "it's destiny" is not an explanation. It's bad writing, on the level of mind control. It takes away any character agency because it turns their every action into something that was destined/supposed to happen. It's forcing the plot, nothing more. I'm out.

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    The Ultimate Support Character
    ファンタジー · Dyrem
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  • ShEsHy
    ShEsHy3yr
    に返信 NandoXD

    Taking a break, I guess. This whole thing feels like filler, because after this whole mess is through (sometime next year I guess) and the MC returns, there's a big, fat "Meanwhile..." waiting where we're gonna have to suffer through months of chapters about how supermegaawesome the MC was on the xianxia/wuxia side of the story during all this.

    Ch 245 242 Downfall
    Factory Inc.
    SF · Gravedagger
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  • ShEsHy
    ShEsHy3yr
    コメント

    Is there any chance the MC will return before the end of 2020? If not, please let me know so that I can stop reading, since I don't care much for fillers.

    Ch 234 232.1 A certain Lalafell pt.2
    Factory Inc.
    SF · Gravedagger
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  • ShEsHy
    ShEsHy3yr
    に返信 KingofMortals

    The current chapter (226) showed great improvement, to the point that I didn't need to re-read anything several times to understand it, like I had to in previous chapters. There was an easily noticeable improvement in grammar, though admittedly sentence structure still needs work.

    Ch 225 225
    Factory Inc.
    SF · Gravedagger
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  • ShEsHy
    ShEsHy3yr
    に返信 Gravedagger

    Honestly, if this is helping, I shudder to think what state the unedited text was in. I mean, we're talking several grammar and/or sentence structure errors per sentence here.

    Ch 225 225
    Factory Inc.
    SF · Gravedagger
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  • ShEsHy
    ShEsHy3yr
    コメント

    You know, it's ironic that an editor would name themselves "King of Mortal". Pretty much says their (lack of) skill level in their name.

    Ch 225 225
    Factory Inc.
    SF · Gravedagger
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  • ShEsHy
    ShEsHy3yr
    コメント

    5 bucks says that's what's locked up on earth.

    So when Arc heard there's Dragon on Beast Forest he was shocked. Because according to Adam the Dragons hated Adam and his kin. Mainly because they are the ones who hunted the dragons.. And it was Adam who locks up the king of Dragon with the help of the gods.
    Factory Inc.
    SF · Gravedagger
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  • ShEsHy
    ShEsHy3yr
    コメント

    Just how lazy can you be, author? At least throw in some random letters and numbers, not just go XX XXX XXX XX XXX...

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    Factory Inc.
    SF · Gravedagger
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  • ShEsHy
    ShEsHy3yr
    コメント

    "come to us to fight" meaning his drones ambushing them while they're simply flying through space?

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    Factory Inc.
    SF · Gravedagger
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  • ShEsHy
    ShEsHy3yr
    コメント

    That's equivalent to someone in New York seeing someone walking East along the street and "calculating" that they're headed to Beijing.

    "I calculated their possible destination base on the trajectory they are going." Said Eve, she then displayed several possible destinations.
    Factory Inc.
    SF · Gravedagger
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  • ShEsHy
    ShEsHy3yr
    コメント

    This needs some serious editing. I've seen MTLs with better grammar and sentence structure.

    Ch 126 Supervision Cooperation
    Millennium Tension
    SF · YuuZu
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  • ShEsHy
    ShEsHy3yr
    に返信 Mirrors_Immortal

    That's not an Asian thing, that's a poor thing. I'm from Europe, and we did this as well when I was a kid. Shampoo, juice, shower gel,..., basically everything that could be mixed with water, we always added water to when the bottle was "empty", to get one last use out of the product.

    He ran to the bathroom and opened up the tap to fill up half of the bottle with clean water. He then shook the bottle repeatedly.
    Super Gene Optimization Fluid
    SF · 9 lightyears per second
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