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The Wandering of an Unstuck Stepbro: Multiverse Travel

作者: kurit_kun
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WebNovel で公開されている、kurit_kun の作者が書いた The Wandering of an Unstuck Stepbro: Multiverse Travel の小説を読んでください。After being hit by a truck, the protagonist woke up in the hospital in the body of Ryoto, a step-sibling of Rito and Mikan Yuuki.At first, everything seemed normal besides seeing anime characters in r...

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After being hit by a truck, the protagonist woke up in the hospital in the body of Ryoto, a step-sibling of Rito and Mikan Yuuki. At first, everything seemed normal besides seeing anime characters in real life, but during class, he got a notification... _________________ *PING* *New quest* Mission: Be the first to finish writing a test and do a Bully Maguire dance as you go through the hallway. Reward: 100 SP, shop feature unlocked. Fail: You'll be emo Peter for one week. _________________ ...Shit. --- English is not my first language, and I'm still an amateur, but I hope it'll be at least interesting fanfic. The cover doesn't belong to me. I just found it. Discord server: https://discord.gg/cM4bwr5Q3z

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When Jessica* met her partner, she had long term employment, a stable rental and significant savings. After they moved in together, Jessica’s partner became increasingly reliant on her to pay for the rent, bills and groceries. Slowly, the controlling behaviour escalated. He encouraged Jessica to give him joint access to her savings account and later stole most of the money by transferring it to an overseas account without her permission. He convinced Jessica she was no good at IT, so he could get access to her personal banking details and set up passwords for her online accounts. He got a credit card online in Jessica’s name without her knowledge. He wanted a brand new luxury car, so he coerced Jessica into getting an expensive car loan in her name.​ Jessica was struggling to afford the repayments across these various loans. Her partner refused to contribute and lied about working when he was actually gambling at the casino. When Jessica finally confronted him about money, he became violent and strangled Jessica. She says she was afraid that he would have killed her if a neighbour had not come to her aid. Finally, while Jessica was supposed to be protected by an ADVO, her partner pressured her to attend the bank with him and withdraw a large sum of cash from her account. Shortly after, he left Australia and Jessica was left with all the debt. Jessica’s experience of domestic violence made her so unwell she was unable to work. She went months with no income, during which time she attempted suicide and obtained more debt in an attempt to manage her existing debt. For years, Jessica was being chased by debt collectors and suffering from extreme financial stress. Despite working long hours she could not get ahead. Eventually, her wages were garnished, reducing her income to only $495 per week which was less than her rent, let alone her other bills and debt repayments. She was actively considering bankruptcy when she contacted RLC for advice. RLC investigated the financial abuse in the context of the lending by the various creditors. After lengthy negotiations with the creditors, over $80,000 in debt was waived. We also assisted Jessica with a successful claim of almost $25,000 compensation for irresponsible lending on the car loan.

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Legend of the Strongest Zenon

もう読まないでもう読まないでもう読まないでもう読まないでもう読まないでもう読まないで After the great battle against the seven ancient beasts, the seven heroes who fought valiantly against them were all killed, all except one. With the death of his comrades, Nicholas Rinnegan thought that it would be great to have a peaceful life this time. So he chose to seclude himself from the world and read the mysterious book 'Infinitron' which he had got from killing the seven ancient beasts. He then found out from the book that the seven ancient beasts will once again be reborn. A thousand years he dedicated his time to prepare for the upcoming battle so that no lives will be ever be taken again. With no choice as the holder of the strongest Zetron and as the strongest Zenon, he will once again surface and continue his legacy, only to found out that no one knew who he was, unfortunately. =============================== Author: I vow to my soul that I would not dropped this novel and if I did so, may lightning strike me and disentegrate my sould never to be reincarnated again. =============================== =============================== Chapter Length: It will be in an average of 1000 words but I will try hard to make it longer to a maximum average of 2500. Chapter Release: It will be completely at random. =============================== =============================== [Overpowered Protagonist] [Harem] [Strong from the Start] [School Life] [Dungeons] [Monsters] [Action] [Adventure] [Fantasy] [Game Elements] [Ecchi] [Stupid Author] =============================== =============================== Note: I was inspired by the idea of the seven deadly sins on this one. And maybe a lot of other things but this is definitely an original novel not a fan-fiction one. =============================== =============================== Announcement: No critism please. Just comment what you think of the novel and please don't forget to leave a review. English is not my first language and I don't have a wide range of vocabulary. Please bear with the novel and the author, thank you. ===============================

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kurit_kun
kurit_kun作者kurit_kun

Now that I reached 100th chapter it's time for author's review and shamless 5 star is mendatory. Firstly first 10 chapters or so aren't the greatest and I get. Probably the most people dropped around these chapters, lol, but in my humble opinion the quality goes up afterwards. You are probably wondering why they dropped so early on. Well... I commited a grave sin of writing annoying system because I wanted to write some character development and after 10th chapter it gets better or at least that's what people are saying. Secondly my writing format may not be for everyone so if you're not a fan of script format then save yourself some trouble and don't start reading it. Besides these two things iI think the story tunred out quite nice and if you also think so leave positive review.

James_0903_
James_0903_Lv13James_0903_

I don't even care how the story turns out the bully Maguire dance Mission won this review 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

Snake_Orc
Snake_OrcLv4Snake_Orc

Haven’ read it but the billy maguire dance sold it for me.

Psan
PsanLv5Psan

well... the grammar is ok. but this is one of those super ultra annoying systems with ridiculous punishments and way to OP rewards. chapter 5 and 4 quests done he gets spiderman powers and all seen eyes of god". i doubt this gets to 20 chapters

C0DA
C0DALv2C0DA

If Harem has a million Haters, I am one of them . If Harem has ten Haters, I am one of them. If Harem have only one Hater, then that Hater is me. If Harem has no Haters, that means that I am no longer alive. If the entire world accepts Harems, I am against the world. Till my Last Breath, I'll hate Harems

Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5Yuri_is_Ntr

Too much comedy and it's all so UNBERABLY CRINGY. MC is, of course, have personality of beaten dog, submisive, stupid. And romance is just... uuuh. How did you make original looks more mature and pleasant? It's to love-ru for God sake! Either way, that's just horrible.

Huntsman
HuntsmanLv2Huntsman

I haven't seen a decently written and readable To Love Tu fic since forever, so 5 stars. Depends on how the story turns out, I may change it, but good job bro.

lBlaz
lBlazLv4lBlaz

A troll fic, if you can bare with sassy system, unreasonable logic then you can go on read this fic.. ... ..... ... .. ............ ........

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

Slave of system ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................

BASTILLE
BASTILLELv13BASTILLE

One of the most unfunny ff’s out there. Author does a great job with creating scenarios and personalities but a very poor one with comedy. Mc constantly gets humiliated by the system’s punishments, and it is always so awkward to read. Wish the author would have focused more on romance/slice of life in which he has more talent.

redHussar
redHussarLv2redHussar

Speach format: Ryoto: "Aah!" Without properly written dialogs I can't read it. Is it that hard to write like in books and not like a script for a movie?

TFH
TFHLv6TFH

*rant chapter 166* NOTE: "I'm not mad that mc did the unforgivable, I'm mad at the circumstances in which he did it, given that he had NO need to do such a thing" Facts: 1- MC had NO need to rush so much to make money, even if they didn't manage to get enough money to enter the academy in 3 months, they could always wait for the next period, TIME for them is not an issue. 2- MC could have used his abilities to make easy money. With his eyes, he could "LOOK" everything, and finding where the criminals have their money is easy for him, then he can just steal from them for example. 3-MC put his companion in mortal danger after his "hardest Choice" ßûllshîṭ. Now MC will be hunted down by nobles for his actions. To make it worse, his "contact" for the mission knows who he is and can sell that information to the noble for easy money. This directly puts MC's partner in mortal danger 4-MC now did something unforgivable that does not align with his morals compass and it was something that he shouldn't have done given the circumstances. So its completely out of character. Its like having batman kill criminals for no reason. Its not something he would do. MC literally did something unforgivable for money when he had no need to.

ZaweRD
ZaweRDLv13ZaweRD

Srsly everything was fine until system showed up. But not this is a system its a talking one with stupid jokes. Btw when jokes are forced into novel like this its just shows authors inability to insert them in narrative.

illegal_incognito
illegal_incognitoLv14illegal_incognito

mc is just a puppet to the system, its ridiculous hate this novel ..... ...................................................................

Zarc_Dragnero
Zarc_DragneroLv3Zarc_Dragnero

You really have a good way to destroy your novel, it was better if it remained in the world and continued with the classification of a slice of live and romantic, and also look useless sp value with the reward task silly

Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv11Spelloyal

I'll be clear and direct, the fanfic in general is good and interesting, but the author always completely ruins things when he tries to put drama in the story. Basically everything but the drama is really well done and an 8/10, but when the author tries to create chapters focused on drama with the MC going through problems like depression, facing the past and etc the author spoils it so completely that I want to drop the fanfic. We recently had the author forcing the drama with MC making an extremely stupid and unnecessary decision that even in chapter 166 almost made me drop the fanfic. I honestly can't recommend this fanfic to new readers because despite being a fun and interesting read it comes along with some of the worst and most frustrating chapters to read I've ever seen in my 15 years as an otaku (ignoring truly rubbish stories where the author doesn't even try)

LovelyOFnp
LovelyOFnpLv12LovelyOFnp

why is all fanfiction about toloveru all the MCs are naive whayyyyyy 🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅🦅

SOMMO_ARCANO
SOMMO_ARCANOLv2SOMMO_ARCANO

nice story but many powers ruin the plot, even the story is going in a strange direction since he went to Asssination classroom, the system with rewards and punishment is almost useless because besides the beginning he never loses and he just needs to get points free, the gatcha as an idea is worth it enough because most of the skills it has are not really random because it has OP skills and only useful, the author tries to make a character growth but the execution is very mild, there are also characters that spoil the plot like the system, track-kun, the sister of the system, an alien OP inserted at random and various characters, mc has no sense of belonging in the story because that there is or not it does not seem to change anything, so good story and good idea but bad executions in various parts of the plot, not only some characters also have different characters like lala because even if she looks dizzy she is not, she is a genius and very intelligent but she only behaves in a very funny way. do different but here it does not seem so and then other characters still good story I hope the author improves

Pythia
PythiaLv2Pythia

What chapter do i start at to avoid all the unfunny comedy attempts and slave system Main character bs?.........................................

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

MC simp, beta [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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