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Psan
PsanLv63yr
2022-01-03 11:07

well... the grammar is ok. but this is one of those super ultra annoying systems with ridiculous punishments and way to OP rewards. chapter 5 and 4 quests done he gets spiderman powers and all seen eyes of god". i doubt this gets to 20 chapters

The Wandering of an Unstuck Stepbro: Multiverse Travel

kurit_kun
4.2
331 Chs

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Veber
VeberLv14

it´s getting fixed currently so lets hope for the best ^^

3yr
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Den_Hanif
Den_HanifLv1

Just keep reading

3yr
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Man_of_culture_69
Man_of_culture_69Lv2

Mc seems beta ... Another rito

3yr
25
JustJacky
JustJackyLv14

Man... I'm going to be honest this review while honest doesn't deserve this low since it's just a abusive system and honestly I love the banner between the two right now.

3yr
JustJacky
JustJackyLv14

Also the powerful rewards of just a part of system novels like I can read 10 fanfics and 2 of the 10 are going to have something dumb like this.

3yr
2
Goatless_Pillow
Goatless_PillowLv2

this comment didn't age well did it XD

2yr
16
quiler
quilerLv15

Current chapters atm 109

2yr
Netherworld_fire
Netherworld_fireLv12

Current chapter count 219

2yr
Eternal_Jokr
Eternal_JokrLv4

-Current chapters count: 239

2yr
Psan
PsanLv6

i know... sadly author decided to destroy his mc morals for not a good reason in soul society in bleach. so i dropped this

Eternal_Jokr:-Current chapters count: 239
2yr
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kurit_kun
kurit_kunAuthor

It's later revealed why he did what he did but in short, it was a mix of past trauma and guilt plus a bit of paranoia because of a stressful situation. There were some other minor reasons but that's the gist of it.

Psan:i know... sadly author decided to destroy his mc morals for not a good reason in soul society in bleach. so i dropped this
2yr
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Psan
PsanLv6

uh... i will try later then. im still upset you made mc kill a mother for money

kurit_kun:It's later revealed why he did what he did but in short, it was a mix of past trauma and guilt plus a bit of paranoia because of a stressful situation. There were some other minor reasons but that's the gist of it.
2yr
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kurit_kun
kurit_kunAuthor

Psan:uh... i will try later then. im still upset you made mc kill a mother for money
2yr
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scarletking001
scarletking001Lv15

I'm still at chapter 10 and I'm hating the system will it stay annoying or will it change 🙃

1yr
Psan
PsanLv6

i dropped it. But not because of that. author made mc do something that the mc would have never done. At least under the corcunstances he was in. if he changed some things which would have forced mc to do it, is underatandeable. but he had no need to do what he did.

scarletking001:I'm still at chapter 10 and I'm hating the system will it stay annoying or will it change 🙃
1yr
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scarletking001
scarletking001Lv15

i didn't like it anyway so thanks 😌

Psan:i dropped it. But not because of that. author made mc do something that the mc would have never done. At least under the corcunstances he was in. if he changed some things which would have forced mc to do it, is underatandeable. but he had no need to do what he did.
1yr
DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv14

It’s just the sign of a weak character; killing people that don’t deserve it for character development smh

kurit_kun:It's later revealed why he did what he did but in short, it was a mix of past trauma and guilt plus a bit of paranoia because of a stressful situation. There were some other minor reasons but that's the gist of it.
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kurit_kun
kurit_kunAuthor

Now that I reached 100th chapter it's time for author's review and shamless 5 star is mendatory. Firstly first 10 chapters or so aren't the greatest and I get. Probably the most people dropped around these chapters, lol, but in my humble opinion the quality goes up afterwards. You are probably wondering why they dropped so early on. Well... I commited a grave sin of writing annoying system because I wanted to write some character development and after 10th chapter it gets better or at least that's what people are saying. Secondly my writing format may not be for everyone so if you're not a fan of script format then save yourself some trouble and don't start reading it. Besides these two things iI think the story tunred out quite nice and if you also think so leave positive review.

2yr

James_0903_
James_0903_Lv14

I don't even care how the story turns out the bully Maguire dance Mission won this review 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

3yr
Snake_Orc
Snake_OrcLv11

Haven’ read it but the billy maguire dance sold it for me.

3yr
C0DA
C0DALv2

If Harem has a million Haters, I am one of them . If Harem has ten Haters, I am one of them. If Harem have only one Hater, then that Hater is me. If Harem has no Haters, that means that I am no longer alive. If the entire world accepts Harems, I am against the world. Till my Last Breath, I'll hate Harems

3yr
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Too much comedy and it's all so UNBERABLY CRINGY. MC is, of course, have personality of beaten dog, submisive, stupid. And romance is just... uuuh. How did you make original looks more mature and pleasant? It's to love-ru for God sake! Either way, that's just horrible.

2yr
Huntsman
HuntsmanLv2

I haven't seen a decently written and readable To Love Tu fic since forever, so 5 stars. Depends on how the story turns out, I may change it, but good job bro.

3yr
lBlaz
lBlazLv4

A troll fic, if you can bare with sassy system, unreasonable logic then you can go on read this fic.. ... ..... ... .. ............ ........

3yr
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3

Slave of system ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................

2yr
BASTILLE
BASTILLELv13

One of the most unfunny ff’s out there. Author does a great job with creating scenarios and personalities but a very poor one with comedy. Mc constantly gets humiliated by the system’s punishments, and it is always so awkward to read. Wish the author would have focused more on romance/slice of life in which he has more talent.

3yr
redHussar
redHussarLv2

Speach format: Ryoto: "Aah!" Without properly written dialogs I can't read it. Is it that hard to write like in books and not like a script for a movie?

2yr
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