The Extra's Dominance

Everyone thanks for the support! Expect thay I will try my best to make the story even better. Also, if you have any thought about my work, just comment it! I honestly enjoy and feel happy reading other's comment to my novel! And please if you can, I would really appreciate if you leave a honest review about my work. ⊂(￣(ｴ)￣)⊃

Hi guys, I keep asking for it but I hope you all can give this novel a chance! Also if you have any advice to improve my writing, pleasplease tell me as I want to improve too myself. (●￣(工)￣●)

I'm just here to give a review, though I can't say much about your work as not much happened yet, though I'll say it's interesting to read and you're doing good being a firstimer :>

writing quality isn't the worst but far bellow the standards of what the rating of the book would suggest, basically reviews seem lil fake 😅 honestly just barely better than some mtl novels that webnovel puts out. story development is very weird at times, there is no pace to it, stuff just happens without a good reason, basically a lot of forced plots just because you as the author can do it i guess. I guess it's due to being an inexperienced author and it's hard to make that plot development seem more natural you, idk... probably know about this problem yourself. characters are honestly bad... like they aren't even budget author pov's copies, copies so bad that it's insulting to the originals. Ye I said it, might seem harsh but that's the reality of things, you have 30+ reviews telling you how good the book is, but it's not.... not even close. the idea it self is good but execution is way off I could go in deeper but I won't lol, maybe will check this book out again in the far future and write another review 🥱

Its actually kinda good, love the synopis, love the character development, its a good book with great potential[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Probably one of the best novel, i read. I love the character as he kinda have relatable trait with me or even with other. While the system is good too, remind me of Raphael in Tensura (slime). But, talking about the writing style, this is surprisingly simple but caught all the detail i need. adding this into my collections, couldn't wait you update it, i just read 4 but i will do it more later. Good luck author!

This ls actually good novel good story and good character development all of it, definitely recommend this novel and as a newbie creating a novel might as well use this too see and improve on how to write and do things when writing novel.

Amazing story, Cool character and wonderful system. The setting and the plot is a good deal. Also the story started with a good thriller 💕. This novel surpassed my expectations. Keep writing

I had a lot of fun reading the first 15 chapters(will make a new review once there are more). For starter’s the mc isn’t an edge lord or psychopath freak, just a smart and collected guy who likes the charm stat. Mc finally doesn’t use a cliche weapon and is also to look cool doing it. for world background and carachter design, it could be better , with more descriptions and depth, but just the Mc makes the story worthwhile. 5 stars!.

What a beautiful story. This storyline is intriguing. This book has a lot of potential and great characters. Keep writing. Keep up the good work. 🙂👍👍

I should have made a review when I first saw this hidden gem but I was to entranced by the beauty of this story! An MC that won't follow the son of fate like a lost puppy and would give up his chances of power to the fated one, I love it! Raven is by far my most favorite character out of all the transmigrated/reincarnated Author Extra's. I'm sick and tired of MC's like Ren Dover or Kim Hajin always protecting the child of prophecy, like they're heroes!! They can protect themselves, due to hiding their power, they even allow teachers, students, basically everyone to mock and insult them because they are "weak", even 6 months of suffering didn't change Ren and that's sad, worry about yourself first, like a powerful and wise warrior once said, "Close your heart to their desperation, close your heart to their suffering, do not allow yourself to feel for them, they will not feel for you."

There were some capitalization errors and punctuation errors but other than that it was nice to read. The system having an attitude issue is also funny and refreshing to see. Also I think a lot of authors here can relate to the beginning

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I have a feeling this your novel is gonna be successful. But there are something's I pinpointed when reading, the tenses you used are kind of confusing, that's all. I hope you correct them for the future. Well nothing much to say but: Welcome to the World of Authors!💥🎉

I've read a few chapters and it's very interesting. This is my first time reading such a novel I mean cole gets to leave his novel. Thumbs up to the author, nice one.

Just another great book I came across this month in Webnovel. Author has a really significant skill to make the fiction feel real that I felt like I was right there in the story!

This is definitely a good read. Being pulled into your own novel? now that's some thrilling kick-ass book right here . The character design is stable, and the story development is quite good too. Though the author still needs to work on the writing quality for it is essential , but overall this novel is a hit!

Hey author, I must say, you're developing a lot more than the first time! I can see your dedication and passion. Your plot is indeed unique, but the character is quite blah(reminds me of Saiki Kun). I don't normally read system stories but this kept me coming for more! The world building could be a bit faster but not going to complain about that, seen worse. Overall, it's great!