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The story opens with the scene of a woman finding her betrothed with another woman. And then she misunderstands them. I'm looking forward to seeing Reginald and Olivia fall in love. Though I might suggest you make it a little fast-paced. Thanks for creating this wonderful piece.♥️
yeah... i already hate Madeline.[img=faceslap]
As the shameless author I am, I will like to be the first reviewer for my book! It has awesome world background and comedies between the ML and FL. I can't wait for you to meet other characters too. And no, this work was not stolen. I simply had to recreate it and make it participate in this year's WSA contest! I hope you're ready to vote for me and win together with me in this journey. And yeah, the updates on my other book is the same as this one. Please check it out... My Cold husband, Reginald Hayes. It will be an honor to be part of the list of your favorite author. Again, thank you and welcome to my world. Hehe.🤭
😭 Why does it have to end!?!? uh?😭 This story is literally the best I've read from webnovel! The best historical romance. Author, why na?🥺
You're highly welcome dear! You should not dwell thinking if your writing isn't okay yet. just focus on improving on it and letting your story out in the world. I'm sure it's going to get contracted. keep improving, persisting and fire your goals in getting it. you will get it, girlll! Don't worry about the English... As much as you're ready to learn it to let your story reach out there, you'll learn it quicker! You can do it!❤️
I just started reading this and I decided to use a little time to drop a review. Okay, down to business. Paragraphing: It seems to engross a reader the more they take in the story. The only problem is that they are longer. Most readers hate long paragraphs, so I suggest you break them. The paragraphs get a 3 out of 10. Dialogue tag: Yeah. This is majorly one problem the author is facing. The repetition of the words ‘said’ will only make the story sound too ordinary and not intriguing. It is advised that the author uses more of showing than telling. E.g He could feel his blood boiling as soon as his eyes skimmed the headlines. Cussing out underneath his breath, he clenched his phone tight and threw it on the couch. "What's the meaning of this?" So far... your book is good. I haven't gone deep yet but from the big grin on my face, it shows that I'm really into this story.
Hello! This is Author Shades here trying to give herself a shameless review. Yeah, please come try my story out. It's quite different. The female lead is quite determined in making sure her husband falls in love with her, given the fact that they made a deal with each other. This story is filled with intriguing suspense that's going to make you want to keep turning pages, and with my jaw-dropping Male lead, the cold prince who has a lot of mysteries with him. Do you think he's ever going to fall for the princess's cute and determined attitude? Do you think he's going to soften for her? What about him? His identity? why doesn't the king supporting their marriage? Read to find out, my dearies!
I read this book last week Tuesday, a day before an exam and it got my focus. I could picture myself in the female lead's position and the frustration that came with betrayal. Omo... you've done a good job author. I look forward to open your books with fast passes!🤪 When I have money, I will pay for your book. but just continue doing what you're doing.❤️