Son of Thor - Marvel

I feel like this story has a lot of potential but I personally feel that your bias against some characters I feel like if you wrote with someone editing and making some corrections it might actually be really good let me know if you want some help I’ m not the best but we could try.(I know this is a run on sentence😂)

dont include comics to much. your writing isnt the best and if you include the comics or xmen it will really screw you as its way to hard for new writers to keep track of all the different story lines. thats why there are barely any good marvel/dc fanfics

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Good Novel

This story has potential, however, the author's bias seeps through. Another and more prominent issue is writing quality. Reading this you can tell English is not the author's main language. And a part of me thinks this could be a Chinese fanfic, if it was that'd make more sense... a lot more sense.

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I think your story is very good, it needs a little something here and there but nothing too serious, the pace of the story is also good, not too slow and not too fast, it is obvious that you need to have some knowledge of the Marvel universe, which in my opinion opinion is normal you are under no obligation to give every little detail of how the Marvel universe works, if a person is interested in reading a fanfic on a certain subject it is obvious that they need to have prior knowledge at least of the basics of the universe in which is interested.

did you drop this?

I like this novel please continue. A novel with a lot of potential. The only problem is the slow partition speed. And don't mind other people's bad comments, keep it up.

This story as a lot of potential. I’m looking at is development [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

An interesting story.......... but the character's rise in power is a bit slow, there are few things in the writing that need to be changed and more important to me is that the author uses deity to refer to the domain of the character and it is not deity but divinity and the MC is not a God, he is a demi-god, that they do not have divinity or domain, they only have it when they are promoted to gods ..... but the rest is fine ..

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La idea es bastante buena, me gustaría que modi respondiera a las oraciones de los mortales y visite la tierra en el futuro. Bueno la historia tiene bastante potencial, sigue así.

I have enjoyed the first 6 chapters. we definitely need more chapters soon since I'm interested in seeing where you take this book. keep up the good work.

This story has interesting concepts. I’m looking forward to more released chapters hopefully soon. I’m definitely interested to see how the story progresses further. Continue what you’re doing because it is actually very good.

very good story, just needed some grammar corrections. I also hope it's not harem, or if it is harem I hope it's not forced.

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