MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

Good start. Hope for frequent updates. The plot is interesting and intriguing. The dialogues are not drawn out as in Chinese novels, but neither are they short and dry as in the report. It is read simply and you do not need to ponder what this word or sentence means. Emotions look realistic and believable. There is not a ton of water in chapters, as many authors like to do, where they write about jade skin or a history of a minor character for 10 chapters. In general, I still like 10/10. I am writing a review when there are 4 chapters. Google translator.

Well I'm surprised to say that, this was honestly a great and interesting read. The chapters aren't too long nor too short, just the right amount of words :). The dialogue is not cringy nor dry, its easy to read. the Mc does not needlessly involve himself in the main plot, staying true to the fic's title. the plot isn't forced and flows smoothly in my opinion. the chapters are not boring but interesting and easy to read cuz i had already finished it before i knew. altogether, a solid 10/10.

One of the best novels I have read, the MC feels very natural because of the way it acts, the relationship it builds with the other characters is very natural and the system is very well structured, in such a way that it is a somewhat difficult beginning and on the other hand giving a possibility of greater content to the novel itself, well done author (Google translator)

Been on the fence with dropping this for about a week now, this fic seems to be following the pacing and writing style of chines novels based on the same genre. Plus with these random posts about unrelated matters has dried up most of my enthusiasm for the fic. If I was going to compare this to any fic it would be that one named Black Technology Internet Cafe. It had so many chapters just to fill the word count and praise the MC. No world building and character development is minor and story development has yet to start. I still don't know how people are accepting playing a full immersion VR game without any equipment but a computer/laptop.

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

Pretty weak story Awareness and logical thinking is notably absent in this fanfic, there is no worldbuilding to speak of and 95% consists of mediocre reactions and minecraft's update history. The author doesn't manage to make it realistic nor make me anticipate what happens next.

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This one is ways better than The Game Creator in Marvel. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Story got boring obvious and has no more effort like earlier chapters when author disappears without a warning it's like he's baiting us to want more chapters it would have worked before but now everything is so obvious the character development is terrible and the Marvel characters aren't even acting like themselves they all act the same. This story got popular thanks to the earlier well invested chapters and the author's 'Unique' idea. Overall I don't recommend getting invested on this.

I'm not gonna lie. it was good pace at the beginning. nice concept as well. however, the author ruined in the 56th chapter. if the mc didn't know about marvel, then it might be understandable. but, in that chapter, i conclude that the mc had amazing stupidity, like what? he didn't want something flashy but bought a transformer? seriuously! this irked me tbh. bruh, that world is too dangerous. instead of buying things like escape skill or defense skill, he bought such a conspicuous car, unidentified in that place. and you know, a lot of spies from shield or terrorist group would be able to notice it immediately.

major flaw how do they dive in the game? they just lose consciousness then bam!! they are inside the game! if you can think just a little bit. the game is dangerous

Great story so far! I love this genre of fanfictions but there are rarely any. I do hope you stay in the game-creating and reactions theme instead of trying to make the MC get involved in the Marvel plot like in the other game fanfic "Game Creator on Marvel" whose MC seems to be planning to get involved with Tony Stark instead of sticking to the gaming theme. I think it is much more enjoyable to see the game creating process and the reactions of the players rather than getting needlessly involved in the plot. It is fine to see how the game will affect the plot of the universe he is in, but involving himself seems pointless to the theme of the story. If you do want the characters to interact then something that would be interesting to see is making the MC go in his own games to play and meeting the other characters. After all, only watching people play may get boring for the MC so playing the games with others would be fun especially if they are total newbies to the game.

So far this a good story. The plot is interesting and unique and I can't wait to see how the avengers react to popular games we play today. imagine Thor playing God of War and seeing Kratos, Autreas, and especially himself.

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don't know how or why people like this story it is simple pure utter garbage

author will just drop this book soon enough like they did with the others. not worth the time to get invested in it.

I mean, the story is great and the concept's good, but why is it marked as an Original novel...? This is clearly a fanfic lol. Only reason I gave it a low rating.

Ah another creator game story, But i personally like this better than the other. No offense to other author but his story is just way too focus on him getting stronger while only few are shown about the progress of his game or the players POV of them playing his game.

Writing Quality : Its pretty good. 3/5 stars Stability of Updates: This hardly receives any updates, and despite the author's repeated promises to update, they consistently fail to follow through. 1/5 stars Story Development: While the story began with enjoyable memories, it has now become monotonous and uninteresting. The overall development of the novel is disappointing, especially the interactions with other characters and the repetitive game creation aspect. The author's choices, such as selecting Fortnite and introducing the MC to the Naruto world, appear perplexing and out of place in the context of the story. Characters Design: The absence of sufficient awareness and logical thinking is quite noticeable in the main character, 2/5 stars