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samtheking01
samtheking01Lv132yr
2022-06-18 13:54

I feel like this story has a lot of potential but I personally feel that your bias against some characters I feel like if you wrote with someone editing and making some corrections it might actually be really good let me know if you want some help I’ m not the best but we could try.(I know this is a run on sentence😂)

Son of Thor - Marvel

takeoffyourbra
4.5
9 Chs

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MimicReads
MimicReadsLv14

sounds like CN

2yr
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_VOIDLESS_Lv12

true

MimicReads:sounds like CN
2yr
takeoffyourbra
takeoffyourbraAuthor

looks like but isn't

MimicReads:sounds like CN
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HangerBaby
HangerBabyLv10

dont include comics to much. your writing isnt the best and if you include the comics or xmen it will really screw you as its way to hard for new writers to keep track of all the different story lines. thats why there are barely any good marvel/dc fanfics

2yr

lozny_wer
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ElBarto
ElBartoLv3

Good Novel

2yr
yooooooooooo
yoooooooooooLv5

This story has potential, however, the author's bias seeps through. Another and more prominent issue is writing quality. Reading this you can tell English is not the author's main language. And a part of me thinks this could be a Chinese fanfic, if it was that'd make more sense... a lot more sense.

2yr
Oleg_Nikitin
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Taranjit_Singh_5027
Taranjit_Singh_5027Lv4

Reveal spoiler

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Danilo_Stefanini
Danilo_StefaniniLv3

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Alef_Biersack
Alef_BiersackLv2

I think your story is very good, it needs a little something here and there but nothing too serious, the pace of the story is also good, not too slow and not too fast, it is obvious that you need to have some knowledge of the Marvel universe, which in my opinion opinion is normal you are under no obligation to give every little detail of how the Marvel universe works, if a person is interested in reading a fanfic on a certain subject it is obvious that they need to have prior knowledge at least of the basics of the universe in which is interested.

2yr
Sukuna_The_Fallen
Sukuna_The_FallenLv1

did you drop this?

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