I feel like this story has a lot of potential but I personally feel that your bias against some characters I feel like if you wrote with someone editing and making some corrections it might actually be really good let me know if you want some help I’ m not the best but we could try.(I know this is a run on sentence😂)

dont include comics to much. your writing isnt the best and if you include the comics or xmen it will really screw you as its way to hard for new writers to keep track of all the different story lines. thats why there are barely any good marvel/dc fanfics

Good Novel

This story has potential, however, the author's bias seeps through. Another and more prominent issue is writing quality. Reading this you can tell English is not the author's main language. And a part of me thinks this could be a Chinese fanfic, if it was that'd make more sense... a lot more sense.

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I think your story is very good, it needs a little something here and there but nothing too serious, the pace of the story is also good, not too slow and not too fast, it is obvious that you need to have some knowledge of the Marvel universe, which in my opinion opinion is normal you are under no obligation to give every little detail of how the Marvel universe works, if a person is interested in reading a fanfic on a certain subject it is obvious that they need to have prior knowledge at least of the basics of the universe in which is interested.

did you drop this?

I like this novel please continue. A novel with a lot of potential. The only problem is the slow partition speed. And don't mind other people's bad comments, keep it up.