Naruto - Leader of Kusagakure

What Can I say, It's My First Novel So obv. I have to give 5 stars to myself for even trying.

The start is decent, but the protagonist has no abilities, his system and strength is never shown or used, his only goal is to develop his village by creating books and gathering talents like pets, that are all flat and useless and serve no purpose. The plot is dumb without a meaningful development, the protagonist is not even part of the plot, a lot of events and details are skipped, there's no training or learning, and anyone could find out about his village secrets since he doesn't bother hiding anything.

I don't even know if there is an MC in this fic anymore. The MC hardly ever appears and the story is just some random fic about different perspectives of the citizens of the grass village. Overall its just a boring read.

This is a hidden gem, there's only one other kingdombuildin fic about naruto but it's dropped. Besides this is so much better. Good grammar,the mc is likeable. What's there not to like?

The Story is a cool idea and it is ok so far but I think you need to clarify where you are in the timeline The First Shinobi War happens in the Year 23 The Second Shinobi War happens in the Year 52/3 - 55 Uzushiogakure was Destroyed Between the Years 51 - 54 (not specified) The Third Shinobi War happens in the Years 56 - 64

it was interesting for 15 chapters or so, then it just becomes ridiculous and boring. most chapters have almost nothing to do with shinobi or the greater story, just weird slice of life subplots. the quality of the writing itself goes downhill too. honestly it feels like the autistic mix between a serious novel and a comedy slice of life. it couldnt just pick one and it just made a mess out of itself.

This FanFic is a special one. I started reading it in between others, as I had nothing else to catch up to anymore and I have to say, I am extremely disappointed and positively surprised at the same time. I have been waiting for this to get more chapters for a long time now, but now after finally reading it (to current Chap 126), I can say that it is quite unique. First things first. The Grammar in this is quite good, albeit starting off problematic. The author improved immensely throughout the story, and especially after the first half. I know this is a dealbreaker for many readers so rest assured. The Story is where things get interesting. I started this FF in hopes of finding something different than the majority of Naruto ficitions which all kind of feel the same. I like medieval settings and I love the aspect of Kingdom building. Seeing a nation thrive, especially in the face of hardships and conflict, is just appealing and interesting to me. The world of Naruto is vast and very diverse one, so I hoped for a good adaptation of these premises, but as i stated before, this is where it gets controversial. The author decided to take a more comedic and "peaceful" approach to these things, which stands in direct conflict with what I expected and hoped for, yet it is done in such an interesting and semi-realistic way, that i found myself immersed in this daring approach nevertheless. I binge read this in 3 days and will continue keeping up with this fros sure. You cant really explain this so I have to just advise others to start reading and to judge for yourselves. But despite a comedic approach, there is indeed a stringent story, and a clear line that perseveres throughout the chapters and arcs. You can see the Village MC is leading, rise to relative power and how other small and bigger players react to it. The world is vivid and in motion, and the many characters we know and love, as well as a multitude of original and new characters, with defined personalities and traits, just add to the whole complete picture. Would i have prefered a more serious approach? Possibly! Am i enjoying this as it is? Definetly! This is a fresh breath of air and in some ways just so bizzare and unexpectedly ridiculous, that it is good again. The circle closes and what remains for the reader is a hilarious but intriguing story unlike any other, I have read before. Take this with a pinch of salt, and just enjoy the messy and chaotic madness, which the leader of the village hidden in the grass creates in the ninja world.

So far one of the best naruto novels on the page.....although it is far from being a masterpiece, it manages a good sense of rhythm, the narrative hardly stagnates, the objectives are clear, they are serious when they have to be and funny when possible, the characters have good screen time to develop, the interactions are good and the system is not Almighty... which helps a lot ps: the fact that the novel is not a konoha-fanfic gives it many points ❤️❤️❤️

Sorry I can't give full stars, because there are some things that in my opinion are a bit under-explored such as the MC having a system. But so far the system rarely appears so it looks like it's useless and the MC's power growth is a bit lacking in details such as the amount of chakra or its attributes. That is all and thank you!!

very good always looking out for updates.

Ome of my Favorite stories so far. MC is OP but he uses brain instead. Also Mubuki is The Man, The Myth The Legend haha. Very funny and awesome story. People who didn't read it should give it a try. Kusagakure Rock and Every other Village in Shock

Chapter 37. Sorry I can't continue, the story is starting to get boring because the plot is starting to repeat itself. MC Building a Village > Ninja Clan Rescue > Making a Movie > Back to Building a Village and so on. There are no fights involving the MC. I think this is suitable for those of you who want to see the MC's daily life building a village, if you don't get bored with the same plot. Just that.

This has honestly become one of my favorite stories to follow on here. From reading the other reviews here, I can see that its style is perhaps not for everyone, because as far as Naruto fan fictions go, this one is fairly unique, but I feel what sets it apart are also its strengths. This can be considered a rather slow-paced kingdom building-type novel. The MC is the leader of Kusagakure, a minor ninja nation of little importance in the grand scheme of things. He's fairly wise and resourceful, and we follow him as he slowly improves his nation's situation and standing step by step. You really feel like you're cheering for the underdog here. Another important facet of the story is that it approaches everything with a note of light-heartedness and humor, a rather quirky take on Naruto that calls back to the early days of the series and is in contrast to the vast majority of fanfictions out there. You won't find a fight, big or small, more than every few chapters or so, and mostly it's just very character-centered and -driven scenes, so if you go into it with the wrong expectations of constant action and the like, I can see how you would be off-put. Nonetheless, I would implore everyone to give this one a shot, as I really think that during its run, the novel comes into its own and creates a likeable cast of characters that the story revolves around, and in favor of which some flaws can be overlooked. I really think this is one of the most sincerely unique Naruto fanfics, and certainly a breath of fresh air for me. I binged through it and have been looking forward to the consistent new releases ever since.

Very good. I wasn’t really expecting much going into this but this actually turned out to be one of my most favorite fanfics recently. The story got some nice village development going on. And the mc is not getting dogged on every which chapter. The only complaint I could have is I haven’t seen much of the mc fighting but that’s only a small drawback considering all the other good stuff. It’s a nice work👍

It's a nice story with tons of potential to get even better. The humour doesn't feel forced and chapters are updated fairly regularly. Keep up the great work author👍👍👍

A story about the hidden grass village The hero is Daimu and Kaji Seems to have a power The story didn't appear fun and looks promising Keep going قصة تتكلم عن قرية العشب المخفية البطل هو دايمو وكاجي يبدو أن لديه قوة لم تظهر القصة ممتعة وتبدو واعدة استمر

this is a masterpiece. a rare worldbuilding novel rather than train for 200 chaps plus the comedy is gold 10/10 no doubt about it 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻

If you are tired of Naruto Fanfictions where fighting is the main theme, then this is the perfect fanfic for you. The MC spent his focus on developing the village and kept the most vulnerable victims in times of war, children, and noncombat away from the atrocity. The MC portrays a high level of strategy, cunningness and kingdom-building tendency. Some comments complained about why they don't dive into the practical use of certain clans. I think it's unreasonable to do so. Why? Because they are not to fight wars. The MC invited them for 2 reasons: increasing workforce and population. Without people, they couldn't produce things that could alleviate the economy, and without people who would stand guard and work. Thank you author!

It was fun to read and very relaxing, but the lack of certain details makes it hard to imagine, like the village development. It comes out like introducing only the technology and nothing more, lacking more depth and making it hard to immerse. Secondly, the main character is almost like a side character in the development of the story. Third, the system completely vanishes after a few chapters, which left me quite confused about his strength. If you are not truly planning on using a system, you should just make the main character have a bloodline and training arc so that the banishment of the system will not make some people leave the fanfic immediately. Fourth, the characters are a bit bland in personality or outright out of character. Fifth, you tried so hard in preventing major tragedies that it makes some plot twists of yours become out of context. Sixth, the lies of the main character become too much readable that I'm confused about how people can be tricked by that. This was just a small reminder to me that the lies of the main character are too generic and unbelievable, causing a significant loss of interest. But overall, you made it fun to read, and I managed to laugh sometimes. This was quite successful in storytelling and very relaxing to read, even though it was quite hard to immerse myself in the story. It also gave me another perspective. Congratulation

Love the story. Outrageous and funny situations with realistic settings and evolutions. (English is not my language and I do not like to write more than necesary.)