My accidental isekai life as a Plunderer

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"Hello readers, this is my first time writing a fanfiction so the writing might not be great. If you notice something that is wrong with the writing, please inform me. I hope that by reading your comments, my writing will get better. Thank you."

The amount of reading i have done for novels is +6k hours but thsi is my favourite. This is the type if novel that you will recall even later on in life. Every time i refresh my Library and see this update it never fails to put a smile on me wheather i have just woken up and need to get ready for uni or am just tired. Thx author for this novel!!

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Not good, but could be improved... Some dialogues are missing quotation marks, which makes it hard to know whether a character is talking... . Regarding the story... Just another MC following the protagonist like a lost pet.. He's supposed to be OP but he isn't applying his gifts properly... Also he isn't using his metaknowledge properly, he acts as if he's an OC that doesnt know arifureta..

It is a good first few chapters. The only thing I'm complaining about is whether the characters are either thinking or talking. I couldn't move past the first 2 chapters because of it. The premise is good, but please fix it (I'll delete this comment and review after the author fixes it).

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It's rare to see Arifureta fanfics, and so far there are 2 heroines, but please don't overdo it, so far it's very exciting, but the grammar is very messy, sometimes the quotation marks ("") disappear, and the conversation between two people blends together, like people A and B chatting, usually limited by quotation marks, and different paragraphs, but sometimes they come together, but I'm used to it because I read MTL novels and updates please more often ch19

Author, your ff is very good. I wish you would publish it every day so we could read this beautiful story. Of course we can't force you. So we'll make do with what we have!

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moreeee moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee I like the story it's so good some people might bash you but don't think of it they are just jealous of how great of an author you are

If your wondering if you should read this, it’s a no from me mc is supposedly op to all heck but gets sidelined by hajime the entire story and the mc legit does nothing like if he wasn’t there nothing would change that plus the fact author has a hard on for hajime and gives him all the girls minus shizuka (who I wouldn’t be suprised goes with him too) the writing quality is abysmal and the entire story is told as if someone is writing it down rather than experiencing it 0/10 would not recommend (p.s. I read this on my alt account that’s why it says I have chapters read)

Trash, mc with no thought of his own, acts like a pet, and a background character, trash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trash

I love the story so far..its just hard to recognise dialogues.do something about it

Honestly, a very good read so far Keep up the good work

After the like first 10 chapters it is like MC doesn't know the plot. He doesn't use his Adaptable body efficiently with his healing magic he can cultivate his body and magic infinity. I swear if the MC won't put himself under a gravity magic which take 80% of strength to hold when he gets gravity magic I will curse you to stub your toe everytime you go to get a glass of water at night. But do like chapter length and that this is the only fanfic I know in which the original MC is not show in a negative light nor does everyone of his lovers is not taken.

It is very good keep it up and don't stop 😀 ¡!!!_++"-?"-?"-?-"?_-?-"?6_?_6(6$)6$?6$?$6(_($6($6?6$?"6?6"?6$($6($6?6$"(6"6?$($+5$($5($5(#6(6$(6$($6?6$?6$(6$(6"(6*(6*(6$)6$(6$($6?6$

I like how it is multiple worlds and that he impoved that quickly

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