Mushoku Tensei Arthur

it's a great fanfic, is is interesting to read and have actual character development in them. even if the mc overpower there still a struggle and conflict in the story. the no bullshit op abilty that stack like some complicated RPG like super saiyan blood line, sharingan, etc that make most of fic is a sandbox game.the mc has a real characteristics not just a dumbass 2 dimensional card box with harem, and there a solid development of relationship this fiction. ability are still out of know where though, like learning anime based magic and technique like rokushiki without any step as if they suddenly can do it.

It's a really good fanfic! At first I was skeptical because I always found a fanfic about mushoku tensei redundant, since it is a novel mainly about the development of rudeus and there is no great journey to save the world (at least until the last volume that I readed). To my surprise, the author really managed to write something interesting and pleasant to read, this is certainly a good fanfic. The first chapters have some problems but the fanfic remains interesting and the author improves with time. Despite all this, I can't help mentioning that making an original novel would probably be more advantageous than a mushoku tensei fanfic. Just as I imagined it would be after chapter 1, this fanfic is an almost completely original story, the author is really using the world of mushoku tensei and its characters very well, but the story itself is original. Changing the names of the characters, locations and a few events, this would easily become an original novel. So instead of a mushoku tensei fanfic it is reasonable to say that this is an original novel in the world of mushoku tensei. This fanfic is still incredible, but I can't stop thinking that it can be a waste for the author to write this story as a fanfic instead of an original novel.

This had so much potential, a MC with overpowered sword abilities and some solid wishes. But what we get are really unfunny jokes, and an MC that seems to not mind sharing his woman. He allows Rudeus who is also a grown man to bathe with Roxy, sleep with her and shows her off naked. Also there is a weird chapter where the MC’s parents are fucking and Roxy gets off to them and then the 5 year old MC eats her out while his parents continue fucking. This whole fanfic is just weird as **** and not really entertaining which is a huge shame.

I was looking forward to reading this fanfiction because i loved the original. However, the chapters consist of nearly all fialogue and ver little setting. On Top of that the characters have very little or No buildup and react to situations in a way that makes them bland/dead

it gets too messed up and too much gags and the character's personality is just all over the place he would start crying for no reason , get emotional also for stupid things , and tbh mc just sucks with all that cuck bs and kind of ntr scenes and him being ok with them is just eww , also what the hell is with that noble crap like just get it together! and being noble doesn't mean being stupidly good/merciful/kind but what annoys me the most is the personality and mood swings like for god's sake decide on one either make him an ***** with ***** reactions or just make him a kid with no memories of his past life don't make it both cuz other than being confusing af its also god damn annoying !!

I'm gonna drop or hold reading this fic after 15 chapters, maybe in the future I try to read this fic again if this fanfic still alive by thrn. The MC personality didn't suit my taste, I know how he like Roxy but for a self insert looks pathetic to me like some anime harem protagonist. Everyone knows even maybe Roxy feels he really like her but why he plead her like that(maybe factor was de-age in 5 yes old) but still you author indicating that he mature enough. Well the concept was good tho but this early life of fic didn't suit my taste, it feels like there's two protagonist in this fic but this one the self-insert feels like want grow together with the original protagonist of the story. Feels like less version of beta MC. Its just my opinion.

This is my honest review from me. All joke or comedy in this novel is Cringe even in your otaku's senses. I can't laugh and just put my disgusted faces when I was read this novel. Here is my own rating of this novel in this picture below.

I feel sad for the author i don't know if he is naive or an idiot mc don't have brain and his personality is not stable he tries to act mature but he sound like an idiot then he decides he will act like a child but still fails to do so. This story concept is great but plots, dialogs and mc personality is shit. Mc likes roxy but willing to take bath with his brother and roxy and while he knows inside a kid there is a 40 year fat old pervert is there, i don't know what kind of fetish mc have.

sorry but no.....just no.... even after the first few chapters its still bad.....i tried skipping to the middle parts of the novel...yep...its not just the start thats cringe its all throughout.....if you dont mind having your face minimizing from too much cringe go ahead. well i mean the author di say he did this for fun so.....meh....only meh😑

Didn't live up to expectations. From the first chapter he limited himself to a very low mana reserve, which in no way can exceed the limit of advanced magic. Didn't live up to expectations. From the first chapter he limited himself to a very low mana reserve, which in no way can exceed the limit of advanced magic.

It is one of the worst things that I have read, seriously .... the author has a terrible sense of humor, the MC has several personalities, the author says that he is mature ... but he behaves worse than a child ... constant references to anime, the relationship with ludeus ... and his behavior, I will not delve into any of this, I just want you to know that this is bad. the author wants his oc to develop together with the original mc and that is why he makes him stupid, apart from the fact that ludeus is mentioned more than anyone in this story .. it's bad, awful

Read chapter 30 you understand my very negative review which makes want to drop this drop or maybe i will. WTF was the author thinking when when he wrote the first half of that chapter

Well I wouldn't recommend it if you value your time for these reasons. 1) the author constantly resorts to bad jokes, and mentions of anime 2) this is just a lotuko no tensei with an OC the guy doesn't change the story at all .... it's not even much worse if we read from the MC's point of view 3) the MC's personality is ...... he is simply an idiot, this does not have a character development, they are depressing that ludeus is a better character, the guy is not realistic at all ... it is even preferable to read about a Generic Kirito that of this type 4) The relationship you have with rudeus seems sick to me, the guy is a fat otaku from 30 to 40 years old, you with your MC should make a clear difference between them but you made him more of an idiot ... he even pretends to have rudeus to That they defend him has the expense that he has desires op. 5) wishes are useless for shit because he's just a normal guy and he's not a big deal anymore ... it should already be one of the strongest shits in that anime .. but you just want him to be paired with rudeus who is a normal guy and doesn't even have anything like wishes or greater understanding than your character supposedly has

not recommended for selfish people who want to be free from the chains of destiny ~ And well .. if you are someone who wants to follow scenarios, to be toyed with and bound by fate, this is for you ~

One of the best fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

I'm giving you 5 stars because I have faith on this rewrite, you can do it author...........................................................

Despite there are still chapters left for me to read, I can't help but write a review in hopes for the author to see it. Even if he/she doesn't, I hope that I could help someone make a decision from either start reading this fanfiction or not. So, here we go. Please bear in mind that the second paragraph can be very rude. Paragraphs after it is my overall review, so you can skip the second one if you want. First and foremost, I will start with the one thing I hate (almost to the point of me being abhorrent of it, not joking)... The Fucking anime 'references,' especially in and after the graduation chapters. I don't hate anime, but the author just write so much of it that I can't stand it. Whenever I even see a glimpse of the author writing the references, I will skip that chapter even if I ended up skipping half of what he/she wrote. Oh yeah, I skipped most of the graduation chapters, only reading half of "Graduation 1," some parts of 2 and 3, and the moment where Roxy leaves. I reckoned those were the chapters that made people drop reading this. Almost forgot about the roleplays. I hate that as well. Whew, with that out of the way, let's start the review. The writing is okay. But I think if the author used a website like Grammarly, it could be better. Even if he/she doesn't, its not a problem as people could read it well... for me at least. Oh yeah, the author should decide if he/she wanted to use either Japanese or English for honorifics. The way he/she write something like "Lord Arthur(-sama) and Lord Rudeus(-sama)" just grinds my gears a bit. If you can't write a consistent character, at least be consistent in writing... well, he/she kinda is tho'. The character? Its a no for me. The author should've put a little bit more thought into the MC's character. I did just read until chapter 29 (by the time I write this review) so author probably already fixed it. As for the story development, it follows the original (kinda) so I don't have any problems with it. Its the same for world background. Since the world is already established by virtue of the fanfiction title, the author doesn't have to write too much of it. But he/she did managed to write the world well enough for someone like me to understand (I only read the manga long ago), so huge props for the author 👏. No comment on update stability. Overall, I would recommend this fanfiction if a person just wants to read something (like eating a snack). But if a person wants to get immersed into what he/she reads, then I suggest you go elsewhere. I know that my second paragraph is very harsh, but please don't think that I'm attacking the author personally. Its well within his/her right to write, so the author can write whatever he/she wants. Obligatory happy new year 🎉

I do hope you can make him and his harem immortal or at least live for a few thousand years. and can you speed up. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Loving it ...........................................................................................................................................

cant believe the author left with nothing no cheat no nothing except for his memories the previous one was better I'm disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruin