GinOokami

Small preamble. I would like to say thank you to the author for simply writing fanfics. The state of fanfics currently in webnovel is atrocious. So many translation bullshit that I'd rather not touch with a ten foot pole. I know translating things, especially stories, require time and hard work, but its just not the same. Anyway, to the actual review. I like how this particular author writes her stuff, it's easy to read and no hard words that needed google searches every 3 minutes. This counts for Limitless and her other MHA fanfic, which I forgot the title name (sorry about that). The story development is pretty good. The early training arc wasn't prolonged to hell and back, which I appreciate, but it really doesn't do anything. I don't know how to explain it better than "justification" for certain things, like MC having a good build, early morning training, and powerful combat abilities. To be fair, that is what training arc is supposed to do, to justify things, to allow authors leeway for MCs to do some incredible stuff (physical or magical). But at the end of the day, the quirk takes the spotlight the most, which is fitting cuz its MHA and the limitless technique is bullshit like that. Not to mention this "X factor" that was mentioned once and never again. Well, it honestly doesn't matter that much. Too much tangent, sorry. Anyway, I have no other issues with story development... Actually, I do, let's pause it for later. I have no issues with update stability, seeing as I'm currently binge reading this fanfic. Character design... lets see... the background information for MC in chapter 1 did jack shit. It only states that MC was once a hitman...and that's it. That hitman experience of his is forgotten entirely. It doesn't get incorporated into MC's character. This irks me even more after the USJ incident. I'll get to that later. The world background doesn't really have anything to mention, not good nor bad. Its just MHA with small AU stuff here and there because of creative liberty. Overall, a good fanfic to read and follow. Hopefully there is an end, because it'll be unfortunate if the author just stops midway like Act-Age. Anyway, a rant. It's not important to the review, but I guess I want to do this because it is a bit relevant to the story. It was foreshadowed that Jane could be related to something from the other side of the heroes spectrum, with the source material for her being a double agent and all. But for fuck sake, I really don't like that there is some chance of her actually "betraying" MC. To be fair, that whole stuff could just be spice to add, some drama to be cooked for later, and could reveal that love does prevail in the end. But I just don't like any small chance of betrayal occuring. Granted, this could just be a personal baggage that I'm superimposing with the story, but it makes it really fucking hard for me to continue reading. Don't get me wrong, I like drama. I can stomach misunderstandings. But betrayal, even only a small chance of it actually happening, is something that just grind my gears a little too hard. Well, it was something that already happened in the story, so I'll most likely avoid reading this fanfic until either more chapters (like 100+ or something) have been posted, or I forgot that small plot point and is bored with nothing to do. I will, however, continue reading and supporting your other MHA work, cuz that shit is sublime

Wow, what a good-hearted author

He is a Fool, after all.

Do you have any good Nihility characters (at least 2) that you can use, and felt like your account needs 1 more hypercarry? Then you may want Acheron. If you have Dan Heng IL, you probably want Sparkle. However, keep in mind that Acheron needs her LC

Yup, it'll be quite a huge spoiler too, if the leaks so far turns out to be true. But then again, being a huge spoiler or not depends on the story that'll be released on 2.2

Sam drip marketing came first, but they realized it was stupid, so they relocate Sam to another version

Whoops, wrong paragraph

Sam drip marketing came first, but they realized it was stupid of them to do so, so they relocate him to another version instead

I don't know why it took this long for me to realize, but this Odin isn't any different from God of War: Ragnarok's Odin. They play (or at least what I think this Odin is doing) a part of someone approachable. Sure, their methods are different, but the purpose is.

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