It's a really good fanfic! At first I was skeptical because I always found a fanfic about mushoku tensei redundant, since it is a novel mainly about the development of rudeus and there is no great journey to save the world (at least until the last volume that I readed). To my surprise, the author really managed to write something interesting and pleasant to read, this is certainly a good fanfic. The first chapters have some problems but the fanfic remains interesting and the author improves with time. Despite all this, I can't help mentioning that making an original novel would probably be more advantageous than a mushoku tensei fanfic. Just as I imagined it would be after chapter 1, this fanfic is an almost completely original story, the author is really using the world of mushoku tensei and its characters very well, but the story itself is original. Changing the names of the characters, locations and a few events, this would easily become an original novel. So instead of a mushoku tensei fanfic it is reasonable to say that this is an original novel in the world of mushoku tensei. This fanfic is still incredible, but I can't stop thinking that it can be a waste for the author to write this story as a fanfic instead of an original novel.

This had so much potential, a MC with overpowered sword abilities and some solid wishes. But what we get are really unfunny jokes, and an MC that seems to not mind sharing his woman. He allows Rudeus who is also a grown man to bathe with Roxy, sleep with her and shows her off naked. Also there is a weird chapter where the MC’s parents are fucking and Roxy gets off to them and then the 5 year old MC eats her out while his parents continue fucking. This whole fanfic is just weird as **** and not really entertaining which is a huge shame.

I was looking forward to reading this fanfiction because i loved the original. However, the chapters consist of nearly all fialogue and ver little setting. On Top of that the characters have very little or No buildup and react to situations in a way that makes them bland/dead

it gets too messed up and too much gags and the character's personality is just all over the place he would start crying for no reason , get emotional also for stupid things , and tbh mc just sucks with all that cuck bs and kind of ntr scenes and him being ok with them is just eww , also what the hell is with that noble crap like just get it together! and being noble doesn't mean being stupidly good/merciful/kind but what annoys me the most is the personality and mood swings like for god's sake decide on one either make him an ***** with ***** reactions or just make him a kid with no memories of his past life don't make it both cuz other than being confusing af its also god damn annoying !!

I'm gonna drop or hold reading this fic after 15 chapters, maybe in the future I try to read this fic again if this fanfic still alive by thrn. The MC personality didn't suit my taste, I know how he like Roxy but for a self insert looks pathetic to me like some anime harem protagonist. Everyone knows even maybe Roxy feels he really like her but why he plead her like that(maybe factor was de-age in 5 yes old) but still you author indicating that he mature enough. Well the concept was good tho but this early life of fic didn't suit my taste, it feels like there's two protagonist in this fic but this one the self-insert feels like want grow together with the original protagonist of the story. Feels like less version of beta MC. Its just my opinion.

This is my honest review from me. All joke or comedy in this novel is Cringe even in your otaku's senses. I can't laugh and just put my disgusted faces when I was read this novel. Here is my own rating of this novel in this picture below.

I feel sad for the author i don't know if he is naive or an idiot mc don't have brain and his personality is not stable he tries to act mature but he sound like an idiot then he decides he will act like a child but still fails to do so. This story concept is great but plots, dialogs and mc personality is shit. Mc likes roxy but willing to take bath with his brother and roxy and while he knows inside a kid there is a 40 year fat old pervert is there, i don't know what kind of fetish mc have.

sorry but no.....just no.... even after the first few chapters its still bad.....i tried skipping to the middle parts of the novel...yep...its not just the start thats cringe its all throughout.....if you dont mind having your face minimizing from too much cringe go ahead. well i mean the author di say he did this for fun so.....meh....only meh😑

Didn't live up to expectations. From the first chapter he limited himself to a very low mana reserve, which in no way can exceed the limit of advanced magic. Didn't live up to expectations. From the first chapter he limited himself to a very low mana reserve, which in no way can exceed the limit of advanced magic.