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Marvel: The Alternate Spider (Dropped)

作者: Crooked_Pool
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What is Marvel: The Alternate Spider (Dropped)

WebNovel で公開されている、Crooked_Pool の作者が書いた Marvel: The Alternate Spider (Dropped) の小説を読んでください。THIS IS DROPPED!I want to improve my writing/world building/character development skills so that I can move ahead with the story easily. Sorry for giving you this. But you may still read it point out ...

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THIS IS DROPPED! I want to improve my writing/world building/character development skills so that I can move ahead with the story easily. Sorry for giving you this. But you may still read it point out mistakes and help me. Thank You for reading this story and helping me improve my skills. ---------- What if Peter Parker knew the future? What if he had the chance to save Uncle Ben and change everything about his life? Will he still become "the friendly neighborhood spider-man" or will he become something else entirely? Experience the growth of this alternate spider in an alternate universe. ---------- My first language is not English. This is my first work, although dropped but it still helps me a lot in identifying my failures and weaknesses. So feel free to comment anything and everything about the story. If you do not like the story please tell me why, so that I can improve those aspects in my next chapters.

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Retro_Plaid
Retro_PlaidLv4Retro_Plaid

I really like this story and everything about it, but the only problem i have is when the people talk in the story like they use i do not instead on don't and that's it. it just feels like a bit robotic.

shyamvimal93
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Well written and awesome storyline and premise. MC (peter) is not suddenly OP or anything and is getting stronger at a reasonable pace for a superhero story. Like and recommend. Keep up the great work author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

Ajmal_Sha_Ns
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This is one of best facfin about spider man. This story has potential. Also i like mc character, also not sudden op mc. Hope author continue this till end

Goldenswiftreader
GoldenswiftreaderLv5Goldenswiftreader

A great premise for a Spider-Man story, am greatly interested in the direction the story will go. Needs some grammar work, but otherwise legible. Love the research done for character background.

The_Crimson_Abyss
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I ain't giving any reason for the rating. .................................................................................................................................................

Mars_Carrillo
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Really enjoyed the story and your take on a transmigration into Peter. The writing could be awkward sometimes, but overall it wasn't the worst.

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