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LemneDoIt4U
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2023-08-24 21:00

Writing Quality : Its pretty good. 3/5 stars Stability of Updates: This hardly receives any updates, and despite the author's repeated promises to update, they consistently fail to follow through. 1/5 stars Story Development: While the story began with enjoyable memories, it has now become monotonous and uninteresting. The overall development of the novel is disappointing, especially the interactions with other characters and the repetitive game creation aspect. The author's choices, such as selecting Fortnite and introducing the MC to the Naruto world, appear perplexing and out of place in the context of the story. Characters Design: The absence of sufficient awareness and logical thinking is quite noticeable in the main character, 2/5 stars

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SlimNeez
SlimNeezLv14

Couldnt have said it better myself.

Darwin111111
Darwin111111Lv4

Completely agree with you. I rewatched this story because they updated it and it seems less than meh to me. It basically skips everything interesting.

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