Good start. Hope for frequent updates. The plot is interesting and intriguing. The dialogues are not drawn out as in Chinese novels, but neither are they short and dry as in the report. It is read simply and you do not need to ponder what this word or sentence means. Emotions look realistic and believable. There is not a ton of water in chapters, as many authors like to do, where they write about jade skin or a history of a minor character for 10 chapters. In general, I still like 10/10. I am writing a review when there are 4 chapters. Google translator.

Well I'm surprised to say that, this was honestly a great and interesting read. The chapters aren't too long nor too short, just the right amount of words :). The dialogue is not cringy nor dry, its easy to read. the Mc does not needlessly involve himself in the main plot, staying true to the fic's title. the plot isn't forced and flows smoothly in my opinion. the chapters are not boring but interesting and easy to read cuz i had already finished it before i knew. altogether, a solid 10/10.

One of the best novels I have read, the MC feels very natural because of the way it acts, the relationship it builds with the other characters is very natural and the system is very well structured, in such a way that it is a somewhat difficult beginning and on the other hand giving a possibility of greater content to the novel itself, well done author (Google translator)

Been on the fence with dropping this for about a week now, this fic seems to be following the pacing and writing style of chines novels based on the same genre. Plus with these random posts about unrelated matters has dried up most of my enthusiasm for the fic. If I was going to compare this to any fic it would be that one named Black Technology Internet Cafe. It had so many chapters just to fill the word count and praise the MC. No world building and character development is minor and story development has yet to start. I still don't know how people are accepting playing a full immersion VR game without any equipment but a computer/laptop.

Pretty weak story Awareness and logical thinking is notably absent in this fanfic, there is no worldbuilding to speak of and 95% consists of mediocre reactions and minecraft's update history. The author doesn't manage to make it realistic nor make me anticipate what happens next.

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

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Just an ordinary reader that started to write again. Just an ordinary reader that started to write again. Just an ordinary reader that started to write again. Just an ordinary reader that started to write again.

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