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Midlander
MidlanderLv41yr
2023-02-19 09:34

I used to consider this particular fanfiction as one of my favorites, as the game making and development aspects were exceptionally made. However, as of this review, the latest chapters have been rather dull and uninteresting. The protagonist getting in a romantic relationship and being all lovey-dovey with an individual whom they only met for 2-3 days 😫🤢🤮 felt unrealistic and forced(very), causing me to feel second-hand embarrassment and a bit of disappointment while reading(I literally smacked my face). If I were to be asked, I would prefer it if the story went back to focusing more on the game-making and development elements again. Well that's what I feel, but I'm still going to continue reading it, and hope it's gets better.

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Midlander
MidlanderLv4

"Considering that it is a fanfiction, it may not be intended to be realistic, but I believe that some readers can relate to my sentiments. Do you agree?"

Stick_Swinger
Stick_SwingerLv3

Now, I'm not defending this because I have yet to read through it, but I'll say this much. You would be very surprised how fast people can hook up in real life. Two to three chapters in this novel could be hours, days, I've yet to know, I'm just pointing that out...

Midlander
MidlanderLv4

Stick_Swinger:Now, I'm not defending this because I have yet to read through it, but I'll say this much. You would be very surprised how fast people can hook up in real life. Two to three chapters in this novel could be hours, days, I've yet to know, I'm just pointing that out...
Midlander
MidlanderLv4

ohhhh, I guess, but Hooking up with someone within a short amount of time isn't good way to build lasting connection with someone.(which hook up aren't really for,(apologies if I'm mistaken, I had to search what hook ups are) as it basically just a sexual encounter(?). But in the fanfic, they didn't as much "hook up", but just got straight into a relationship.

Stick_Swinger:Now, I'm not defending this because I have yet to read through it, but I'll say this much. You would be very surprised how fast people can hook up in real life. Two to three chapters in this novel could be hours, days, I've yet to know, I'm just pointing that out...
Ireallylikereading
IreallylikereadingLv4

sorry to tell you this but as someone whose been keeping up with the latest chapter i am again sorry to say this to you but no it doesnt get better in fact it gets worse

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