In Bleach with a System!

I haven’t read a singke word yet, butbits a bleach story and I dont see to many of those. Also, Nel is my waifu, so enjoy the free 5 star review.

i enjoyed reading the first few chaps but later ones are a bit irritating. quality wise it's well written and have an interesting start that I'd love to read more about. the mc is my only problem with this fic really. when I first started reading, the mc seemed like a smart anti hero type of guy who plans before thinking. but soon though, he became a generic goody two shoes who goes into danger without a second thought and risks his life for others. and just like every goody boy he becomes a passive bitch in front of a beautiful female character, like letting them physically wound you for no reasons. i know yoruichi didn't mean anything by it, and author-san probably wrote it for comedic purpose but it's still extremely annoying and makes you dislike the character. I'll probably drop it if this continues. hopefully he gets back to his senses instead of taking idiotic risks and going after girls without any self respect for himself.

Only four chapters at this point but it's super interesting. I like mc character as well. Bleach fanfics are already rear, I just hope author doesn't abandon it too soon. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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The system user, or fullbringer lol. No seriously not using the mc's name is cheesy but I can still handle it. My very problem is that the synopsis of this fanfiction was a lie. The mc is supposedly not a good guy, but he's just another dude with hero complex. His interactions with the system are cringe to say the least and the poor comedic relief doesnt make up for his lack of power. Then again it was my own fault. I should have stopped reading when I realized it was a mission type system novel. Good luck to the author but this fiction is everything I hate condensed in one. Read it if it's for you. To me it didnt feel like a fanfic, but the original series, with a more stupid protag.

An interesting start to the story. The system doesn't seem like too much of slaave driver with no type of forced quests. The unique ability of fullbring is a mystery unless you're a shounen character that explains about own special abilities/trump card to enemies. As long as MC is pragmatic and even a bit paranoid even among the so called "allies" in his approach about his fullbring the flaw of the ability is really hard to just guess. And it is just the first of many mystical abilities I think. The Fan-fic has me hooked.

This.......this.......this is beautiful, love the Mc's personality, love his system and her trolling nature, I love everything, cant wait for those "cultured" scenes, I just love how everything feels natural like it really happened in the anime with a little spice, the only thing that hurts my soul is finding it too early☠☠☠

Do you have a patreon for early release chapters? I cant get enough of this as it is 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

Only four chapters at this point but it's super interesting. I like mc character as well. Bleach fanfics are already rear, I just hope author doesn't abandon it too soon. ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

/(+-+)/ te mando todas mis energías para que salgan más capitulos. cuando llegues a las 15 k palabras estoy seguro que se volverá más popular tu novelas, así que continua.

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the best bleach story i have ever read(i think) please update soon edddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddds

I literally wrote an essay like review, but the site reloaded, so yeah....it made me a little salty tbh. Anyway, the only problem for people is, that he has a talking system that appear's every 3 chapter's for 2 sentence's. Well, and that the mc first looked like an "i only give a fu*k about myself" or a "anti-hero" just to switch to a goody-too-shoe's. Which is not the truth tbh, especially seeing the newest chapter. He's just using the plot to get stronger, and Ichigo is pretty strong later on. And being kind to Ichigo give's him a strong ally and power in the form of training with Urahara. Well, it's not like he really need's Ichigo.

the character design is pretty good and your knowledge about bleach is great. i like how you didn't add romance in the tags. you can improve his ability by every page like with the second page he can use his ability twice then with the third page he can use two rules and so on.

i'm just gonna put this here don't mind me

this is a good start. keep it up author! Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp

this fanfic is the second good bleach fanfic in Webnovel also my favorite are the dark skin duo beauties (Yoruichi and Harribel) along with Rangiku

I likey. Mc is chill, so far hes no beta.

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